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Reviewer: emshoshoshe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2021 8:14 PM Title: Got it?

very very good

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Date: April 17 2021 4:26 PM Title: Decisions

Okay. While I think this story is impeccably written like all of your stories, I feel like this one has a crucial flaw: the worldbuilding (and in a related fashion, George's backstory). I don't have enough of a suspension of disbelief to buy into the idea that people would so quickly start selling tiny people like pets and treating them worse than actual pets like cats and dogs. I could see a black market happening, but with rich tinies still having a somewhat normal life, I find it hard to imagine that tinies in general wouldn't be looked after in some capacity. Speaking of which, I would assume George has family, so why wouldn't one of them look after him? And even if he didn't, how did he end up in the alley? To be honest, I feel like this story would have benefited from less backstory in general, since in that case I would likely feel less inclined to sympathize with George. 

All of this combined made me absolutely despise Laura's treatment of him. Sure, whenever you're training a dog for example, you've gotta be unfair sometimes so they know to do/not to do something, but she was beyond excessive.

I do like how you addressed the fact that it's probably Stockholm Syndrome that made him love her. I also like how Sarah actually had a conscience and treated him somewhat like a human, but getting to that point was almost unbearable for me.

However, I see how many other people like this story, so most of this is probably just personal preference on my part. After stories like this and the Yield stories on DA, I'm realizing that while I'm probably fine with cruelty, I can't stand injustice, especially in regards to people being stripped of their humanity.

So this was really just a long-winded way to say that I love your work, but this story wasn't for me. 

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Date: June 10 2018 9:23 AM Title: This is the life

Oh wow, this story is like the polar opposite of Terror Against Tenderness. :) Or at least, thus far. I'd imagine that when/if George ever gets back to Sarah. His life will become a whole heck of alot easier. But even then, only if he manages to completely let go of the life he once had. And embrace the one that is being forced upon him. Definitely going to be interesting to see how things develope. :) 

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Date: January 02 2018 8:41 PM Title: Got it?

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Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2017 6:11 PM Title: This is the life

This is as far as I've gotten so far, but this is a really good story. You've really done a great job with the detail. And you've done a good job with the characters as well.

I'm gonna keep on reading, but what I've seen so far is awesome.

Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks man. I've read some of your stories here as well. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2017 12:48 AM Title: Got it?

PLEASE!!! Make a sequel! This was an awesome story. The length of the chapters, the attention to detail, everything! It was just awesome! For the sequel, please add more booty scenes. lol I can't wait for more!! Maybe make it a trilogy?! 😍🍑🙃 #GiantessAss

Reviewer: Stephen1000 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 24 2017 11:03 PM Title: Decisions

I love this and i think it needs a sequel. Maybe a new friend takes him unawaringly or you show the struggles he has. I don't want to do the story for you but i would read the sequel if you do make one

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2017 8:23 PM Title: Love

Vote goes to Laura AND I know thisis mean but she should snuff him out. What could be more humilating after expressing his love she makes him pay the ultimate price. 


Also, ignore that bailey dick. There is so much mushy gentle material posted here that I don't enjoy and yet I dont feel the need to leave asshole reviews of the story. 



Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2017 8:06 PM Title: This is the life


Author's Response:

I think there is a reason that is popular in this fetish. Any way, I didn't want that to happen, so I have a different ending.

Reviewer: LockeWood45 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2017 1:14 PM Title: Got it?

I would say Laura, but some part of me wants Laura to lose him on accident and have Miranda, the previously mentioned ex-girlfriend find him and play with his for a few days.

Reviewer: garchomp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2017 12:31 PM Title: Love

This is been a great story so far, very well done! I say Laura should keep him for sure!

Reviewer: Kellerkid11 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2017 10:48 AM Title: Love

Sarah! And have George and Sarah become a couple 

Reviewer: Pdawg2431 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2017 3:10 AM Title: Got it?

Has to be Laura and we need this to keep going. I love that you're more inventive than just feet and butt. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2017 1:44 AM Title: Love


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Date: June 19 2017 9:10 PM Title: Stress

Who couldn't love Laura?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2017 7:06 AM Title: The body

lol the giantess has problems too!


Good stuff.

Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2017 4:49 PM Title: Gym day

Wow this chapter was incredible.  Very hot stuff.  Laura is an incredible giantess who seems to have made an art form of breaking tinies.  I love how she uses her body and smell to constantly exert dominance especially when showing off to her friends.  I can't wait for more chapters!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2017 6:36 AM Title: Out on the town

I love Laura, give her more tinies to break in...hopefully some SW's too.

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2017 4:24 AM Title: Out on the town

Great new chapter! This is slowly becoming one of my more anticipated stories to watch for updates in. I think you do a great job showing off Laura's careless cruelty.

I think it'd be fun if you had Laura somehow sew George into the cup of a bra or back of a thong and wear him for a while. Maybe wear him while she goes out dancing or something? Just a thought. Definitely appreciated the butt content in last chapter, hoping to see George spend more time between Laura's cheeks.

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2017 2:42 AM Title: Got it?

Enjoing the story so far! Could use some more butt vore action!

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