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Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Finale

Great story hope you start writing again.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2007 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Finale

Awesome! No other word does this story justice, except: "Awesome!"

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2007 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Finale

I thoroughly enjoyed this story from start to finish. This was a great concept, and an attention to detail really drove it home and kept it in the time it was supposed to be. Very well done!

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 13 2007 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Finale

Very good, imaginative story.
Two suggestions for improvement of future stories:
1. Give more detail describing the experiences of the little people (sights, sounds, smells. feelings, etc.).
2. Maintain the same tense throughout the story. If told from the third person, I suggest you keep everything in past tense.

Author's Response: I'll try to remember that.  thanks

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