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Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2019 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 85 - We meet again

Been a while since I reviewed a chapter, like Bigdawg been a bit aprehensive about the course of the story.  I to have been for Julie and Sam and am still hoping they get a good ending if not a perfect one.

Jill and Sam shot, well likely for Jill not as bad, you stated that Billy was about 2 and a half feet tall meaning he wieghs around 25 to 30 lbs, having shot a .45, a 9mm, several rifles and other pistols I can tell you that someone over twice his hieght and at least six times his mass has rounds move when firing in haste even with a two handed grip.  Considering the pistol is only just over 1% of my mass and the rounds when firing hastely move around 8 inches consider how much they would move if it was 10% of your mass with the recoil and having Sam immeadity rush you.  The first thing that would happen to Jill is she would fall and for Billy the rounds would rise, One hit on Jill no probelm, two hits maybe 50/50 three or more apporaching nill.  Then there is the weapon he could carry anything heavier then a 9mm would be out, he could get one accurate shot and maybe break his arm (or arms) with the recoil.  Even more likely a .22 pistol, lighter, easier to carry and easier to perchuse as it's a target pistol, but for Billy more then enough to handle Sam and his shrunken body.

Jill had medicial care well within the Golden Hour which should bode well for her, she was able to speak indicating she was breathing and likely her heart was intact, and considering her size bleeding out isn't very likely.

Sam on the other hand being half Jill's hieght and maybe 1/5 her wieght should be in a fair bit of danger, espeacilly if the bullet is lodged near the femural arterity (which with the amount of blood saterating his pants is highly likely).  That he passes out on the way to surgery is likely not a good thing.

As for the review response mentioning blame, kind of hard to blame someone whose been shot so my bet is either Billy, members of Sam's Harem or the police for not protecting Sam and getting Jill involved.

Thanks.



Author's Response:

Without giving anything away, you'll find out in the next chapter that it was a .380. Not the most lethal round, but like a .22, even it can kill. It just depends on what it hits. Remember that Jill was bending over and Billy could have gotten a few shots into her before Sam or Jill could have deflected it enough.

The point here is what Julie feels about the whole situation. 

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