Date: June 06 2017 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Great writing! I love the slow pace to the growth (although I hope she gets MUCH bigger!)
Author's Response:
Cara,
Thanks. I love all the positive feedback. She grows. How much? You'll have to keep reading.
Date: June 06 2017 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Okay, just discovered the story and I love it, do hope he gets smaller then six inches, and his sister makes a return for some more fun in the future chapters.Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
tinyman91,
Thanks. Erin will be showing up again, you can count on that. But take a look again at the size tags again -- you won't be seeing six inches in this story. Not to worry: I have more stories coming that may just feature this size. I just want to get through this first one before posting any others. Stay tuned.
Date: June 01 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
This is an awesome story, very unique and exactly my style, love it
Author's Response:
jes11,
Thanks for the kind words. Hope you like what's coming too.
Date: June 01 2017 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
love the series so far!! thanks for writing it
Author's Response:
clacker,
Thanks for responding. It's the feedback I get here that makes writing that much more worthwhile.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2017 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Hey littless, just caught up on the last two chapters.
First of all the story is still excellent but as I suspected the incest stuff is throwing me for a loop a bit. Maybe it's because my primary interest is the dynamic between Sam and Julie and how their relationship develops in the face of the size changes so anything that distracts from that plot seems like a distraction to me. It sort of popped up quite suddenly as well i think considering the Adam/Julie relationship is only about a month old. At least you do have them stopping to discuss the whole situation so that's good. Basically, If this were a television show I'd want Erin to remain a supporting/recurring guest rather than a main character. Just personal preference of course and I won't be harping on it chapter by chapter or anything if I don't get my way. Lol
I did like the dynamic at play between the three of them when it came to the size play and the relationship dynamics and whatnot. I like the fact that the characters feel fairly "real" for the most part and you do the relationship stuff well. I like the mystery of Julie's growth and Sam's dwindling. Is it actually tied to the inversion table or is something else afoot? Look forward to finding out.
Overall, still invested and still loving the story.
Author's Response:
spgts,
Thanks again for the feedback. Erin is at the forefront now but will remain a supporting character. Don't worry about that. I suppose it is a distraction, but it's part of Sam's life. There will be other characters coming in and out; but not like Erin. There's a reason for introducing Erin this way, but you'll find out later.
As for the mystery of Julie's and Sam's size change I'll just have to say: wait and see.
Again thanks for the constructive feedback. No chapter is final until I send it up to the website. The remaining chapters are all being rewritten all the time. So, things can change a bit, but mostly the story is set. The rewriting is mostly for trying to tell the story the best way possible, but changes here and there can move it along in slightly different directions. I will take the feedback here into consideration.
Date: May 28 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
awesome
Author's Response:
Kyomi,
Thank you. Hope you enjoy what's to come.
Date: May 27 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Sooooo close to being a genuine six footer. Can't wait. Love the veeeery slow shrink as well. I'm sure that will not escape sis's notice.
Great work all around. Eager for more.
Author's Response:
spgts,
Soon. I'm sure you can tell though. Thanks for the feedback.
Date: May 26 2017 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
love the story so far! keep up the amazing work
Author's Response:
clacker,
Thanks. Got a long way to go still. Hope you enjoy.
Date: May 25 2017 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Another stellar chapter. Like other commenters I really enjoy the slow growth aspect to the story. The sibling stuff is interesting but makes me apprehensive about the "incest" tag. Definitely not against it in fetish material, but the downside to crafting and defining characters as well as you have is that the more out there stuff starts to seem off if it isn't handled well.
Definitely enjoyed Julie's playful side. I thought it was a pretty stark contrast to the cafe night. That night was about Sam and this was about Julie's growing obsession with her own size. She either didn't pick up on or chose to ignore Sams discomfort with all the height based play and she was laying it on pretty thick. Definitely no lack of the tension i mentioned earlier.
Look forward to more for sure.
Author's Response:
spgts,
Thanks again. I hope when we get there I've handled the other stuff well. I hope you'll let me know one way or the other. Still some chapters to go though and I don't want to give anything away.
Julie will become more playful. The chapters will kind of bounce around like this too. I hope you like it. I think you'll agree that the tension just gets thicker. All the characters in the story grow, and I don't mean physically. I really hope everyone is good with this.
I'll put another chapter before the weekend. I'm not sure if I'll be able to get any chapters up this coming long weekend though. Hopefully, I can, but we'll see.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2017 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Another great episode. I can definitely appreciate the way, that you can so meticulously maintain the slow growth. This beautiful babe just keeps on getting bigger! So gradually working away at it; without becoming 'carried away' and drastically changing the rate and jumping her up to fifty feet tall (Over-night)!
The last chapter, I failed to comment on the musical addition to our protagonist's talents,(and now) finding out that he has actually written his own music as well, ...that's pretty awesome, it definitely adds to the story - character development - and allowing us to really get into his head; (personality) his nervousness, about performing in front of an audience was very relatable. Then, when he thanked Julie for setting him up, (so to speak) and so suddenly, and "mischievously" forcing him into it.
That was just, ...really good! I really liked that part. Kinda pulled at the heart strings...
Nicely done.
Author's Response:
midnight,
I really appreciate your feedback. I'm not sure how much to say here in response to this without giving things away. I just hope I don't disappoint. I will say, she does get bigger.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Absolutely awesome work thus far man. Really love the characters and the scale that you're working on.
I know you've said that gentle is the order of the day but I hope there will be at least some spikes of tension as the story progresses. I'd also like to see Julie and Sam discuss what's happening to them at some point. They've both acknowledged it and Julie has taken steps to put him at ease, but it's still that elephant in the room.
Just stuff I'd personally enjoy seeing of course and I greatly look forward to reading more regardless of the direction you take the story.
Author's Response:
spgts,
I've pretty much tried to get in all that you've suggested. We'll see if I've succeeded in the coming chapters.
Date: May 20 2017 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Wow this amazing so far.
It's so rare to find a slow growth story like this and written so well! Interested to see where you go with this.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Tyrion,
Thanks for the kind words. I'll put up a chapter every other day or so. I don't like to wait either. Bu you'll just have to patient to see how the story develops.
[Report This]Date: May 17 2017 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
What a debut! I have to agree with MidnightWriter, you can put some space with each paragraph. You could cut them in half, or keep each paragraph with one minor subject.
Other then that, you did a great job with the character introduction. Keep it up, man!
Author's Response:
Shaman,
I appreciate the feedback. I'll made sure not to load the paragraphs up too much in future chapters. I can add space between, so it seems: I think it looks a little bit better now. This first chapter was heavy on description since I'm just introducing the characters. There will be another chapter like this, mostly, but then it will be mostly dialog. I don't dive right in, but stay tuned, the good stuff is coming.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2017 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Nice introduction chapter. I already feel like I'm getting to know, Sam. And, doing that, in a single chapter is extremely hard to do! (and, ...I know it isn't an easy task, either) The paragraphs are just a bit cramped-up, if you could add just a bit more white space it would be an easier read - not too bad though, just a bit.
...other than that, I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm already hooked on this one, and I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting to see if his 'ex-girlfriend' has something really devious planned... I hope she does, but that's just me! ;`)
~Jay
Author's Response:
Jay,
I'm struggling with the formatting. This is my first post and I'm still becoming familiar with the post system. I'll try get more spacing in. I'll figure it out some day. I just hope that day is soon.
Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate the feedback. Whether Julie has something devious planned or not, you'll just have to wait and see. Don't worry, lots more to come soon. I am nearly finished with this story and wanted to wait unil I'm completely done. But I got impatient. That's ok, gives me a chance to learn the system here. I'm planning on posting new chapters on Tuesday and Fridays. What do you think?