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Reviewer: Battlemaster-3d Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2018 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

First may your life start to get better, if writing helps I doubt any of us will complain.

Damn!

Julie! willing to shrink and enduring Sam's attempt to outsmart himself (dozens of times).  If Sam can get out of his own way, and if he can be there just a bit more for Julie (and understand just how much she loves him, 'ton of bricks falling on him'), the trouble was from my perspective Julie felt she was losing him, her 'friends' from the 'sunflower' club were overwhelming her and Sam just can't keep it where it belongs (either in his Pants or where it pleases Julie!).

With her girls of Chloe, Zoe, Tee, Cindy and others, I think they can make it work, Julie seems from the last three chapters to really want it too and her remaining worries that she's too big for him and can't satisfy him, with their support group I think all involved will be well pleased, Julie most likely the most and best served (Chloe being 'normal' and taking care of that, Cindy and Tee being north, Zoe and Sam south).  Four small ones and one normal could have her reaching peaks unknown to mortal woman, but as Sam's Goddess she's earned it '-)

Doubt the problems will end, but with work and honesty they and her girls should do well and do good.

Awesome chapters Go Sam and Julie with Julie's girls...  



Author's Response:

I want to thank everyone for wishing me well IRL. I'm just taking things one day at a time and waiting.

Sam did get himself all tripped up on his words, didn't he? It's a good thing Julie is so understanding. If the girls from sunflower club don't twist her mind their relationship may just work out whatever problems may pop up.

Without spoiling anything to come, I will say, the problems only get worse. Let's see how the couple handles them.

Thanks again for the comments.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2018 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Hey man sorry, hope life returns to normal soon

as for the story.

If Sam wants to be sure he can be safe with Julie when she's anger, just keep putting little Sam where he doesn't belong!  Julie is getting there, I thinks she's starting to figure out who cares for her and who's just likes her cause she is big.  I think Sam is getting there as well, but he needs to 'knock' some sense into little Sam and appericate what he has.

Julie at some level knows Sam is likely one of the best things in her life and for her to find a partner at her size, and have it last past the reveal of little Julie is frankly next to impossible.  Sam is likely the only 'good' (he would be great if he could just keep it in Julie and not spread himself around so much 'helping') male that wouldn't take a HUGE investment of time, effort and even money on a small chance that they would be intrested in her rather then a lower risk partner.  Sam if Julie can control her anger aint going to get much better either.

Now each has issues, Julie seems to be trying to contend with hers, while Sam attempts to deal with his (he did try to resist Zoe, he gave in, but he did fight through half of it).  They need a catalyst to help them get over their issues and help them bond even tighter this time.

Zoe could be the catalyst, she seems to like them both, she has had a couple of 'helping' sessions with both players, she would draw fire from Sam from his "helping' session and though Sam isn't afraid to go toe to toe with Julie for anyone else, if it's for him, I think he losses some fire and Julie knows it.  Zoe, Zoe speaks her mind and if you don't like it F-U.  So if Julie begins to go to far, Zoe's going to call her out, if Sam looks to long Zoe's going to do the same.  Zoe even if she's the smallest maybe the boss at the end...

Think Sam and Julie are the best for the other, they could use help though and they may have to add Zoe to their relationship.  Thank you for the Chapter and again hope your family member gets well soon.



Author's Response:

Julie definitely knows that Sam is one of, if not the best thing, in her life. Sam kind of knows she's the best thing in his life but is afraid to admit it. But how do they make it work given their size differences? That the question. Hopefully, Sam's come up with an answer in the latest chapter of their lives.

Interesting take on Zoe. I think Zoe knows what's going on and will do what she can to make sure things go right. But she's wise enough to be content and sit back to let those things happen. And, being a lesbian, why does she like Sam so much? We'll find out why later.

Thanks for the well wishes and thanks for the reviews.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2018 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Good chapter,

Still rooting for Sam and Julie, though for some reason Sam can't keep his wick dry...  If he can it's a no brainer they should be together again once Julie grows enough personally to put him first in physical encounters (which she seems she will)

I think Julie is starting to get a clue, she's still new to this whole I am big thing and is learning it's not always great for those she cares for, or even herself.  It is also no granentee of respect even from those who convinced her 'how great being big was'.  I hope she will continue to question these things and grow as person.  I think even if the spilt continues Sam will be her friend and she will be his.

As for Sam, again there is almost a supernatural (Dues Ex Machina) need for him to put it any where isnt there.  Though Julie did instruct him to help Zoe, Don't think it was that kind of help.

Seriously there is love beteewn the two, and they are being to feel thing out after masssive changes, Julie having been through the more benefically changes in size has to be more careful with Sam, and Sam having slowly deminished has to let Julie be in charge.  I think both can learn thier new roles, respect the other and make it work.  Sam (keep his wick dry) and Julie (remember just how big you are to others and adjust for thier comfort) please make it work.

On a personal note, Hope everyone gets better in your family, they should come first, it's a great story but if pausing it helps your family feel better, or better yet get better it's more then a fair trade.  Again hope you and your family heal and get better.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

"though for some reason Sam can't keep his wick dry". I wonder what that reason might be. I couldn't be because he's a guy who's given the chance, could it? Nah.

Julie has a clue about being big. But as you'll see in the latest chapter, she's acknowledging that maybe it's not all it cracked up to be. In fact, she's, ... well, just read the chapter (77).

It's funny that you mention respect. That's what it's all about, isn't it. Little people get no 'spect! Right?

Thanks for the review and kind wishes. I hope you don't mind the shout out in the latest chapter.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2018 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

No need for a shout here, I am sure I have done enough damage without one! LOL.



Author's Response:

LOL. I just wanted to pay you all back for the reviews. Thanks. It won't be chapter coming, but maybe another chapter or two after. We'll see.

Reviewer: Battlemaster-3d Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2018 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Sure write me, maybe as a AM radio shock jock peddling thoeries such as Borg causes some women to grow, there are 7+ tall women trying to kidnap the poor victims, ect LOL.  Thanks 



Author's Response:

Cool. I might do something like that.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2018 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

No need for a shout out here,

Just hope all the Borgsford victums get cured, That Julie grows into a good, decent person who influnances poeple well, that Sam can keep it in his pants so he has a chance to be with Julie and help her and that the tall club gets a redemptive arc and I know all will be made clear over time...

Should have 1st book of my own writing done in october, if you don't mind lousy grammer, poor spelling and it taking place in two existing universes it would be helpful for another author's opionion.  Thank you



Author's Response:

Aren't you the boy scout. Thanks.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2018 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Control, thats the one word from Chapter 74 that describes what Sam has done.  He and Wilma had oral sex and a fair bit of cuddling which allowed Sam to feel he has Control.  Control which Julie took on that Saterday, Control which she rather enjoyed.

Sam and Julie love each other, but Julie right now needs to get a hold of her ego and start becoming who she could be and Sam well Sam needs to get control of little sam and help her.

Sam saying that Julie did something, or he hadn't had sex, or any number of reasons isn't going to help the relationship.  To much tit-for-tat is going on, Julie needs to correct herself for what she did, Sam should need to correct himself for what he did.  However Sam seems incapable of correcting himself, Julie needs to help him.

What I am suggesting could end up with the entire house as Julie's haram, no one will be hurt, domination will be slow and gentle, but eveyone in the house could be refering to Julie in her bedroom as mistress Julie or Queen Julie, or even Goddess Julie.

The Corrective action is Control or Julie getting off-basically when Sam screws out side his lane, Julie gets to control Sam until she gets off, no voilince, no yelling, no berating, she has to be kind, gentle, even compassionate.  They agree on a time, they have an observer of at least normal stature with something to calm down Julie if needed, Julie sits indian style puts Sam beteewn her legs and gentle envolpes his head with her breasts.  both are naked of course and Julie pulls out a lubbed "little" Julie and 'carress' Sam from the buttom to the tip of little sam, slowly, gently allowing sam some freedom of movement but not so much he can escape.  Also he can request a pause or stopping if it becomes too much up to Julie and the observer.

With each stroke Julie's satisfication will likely grow and Sam's fear will swell.  He will be lovingly dominated by a love nub that was smaller then finger nail initially, but now is at least a couple if not several times the since of his own member.  With every stroke that dominance will be reenforced, with every stasified, happy or joyful moan from Julie his stature as submissive strengthened.  Julie will ensure it is gentle and loving, that she talks kindly to him, that her fingers lovingly brush his hair, or stroke his chin, maybe even kiss the top of his head from time to time, but she will no doubt being getting her jollies from her being BIG, large and in charge.  Also even though the obeserver is there for his safety, being controlled with an audiance would likely reenforce the message "don't screw around"as 'little' Julie continues to let him know one of the smallest pieces of her antomony is capable of completely dominating him.  Having that reenforced by Julie's previous actions and knowing that more of this is to come if he continues with his status quo Sam's personality may shift at least in the bedroom toward the submissive as her gentle dominance continues.  Julie I hope has grown enough not to be cruel and would end it 30 to 40 strokes in, rather at climax(she can climax in the bathroom, the power high would be increadible as she would the peak, that poor Sam would be able to hear), but the point will of been made you screw around outside of where you are suppose to, you get screwed around with by a horny giantess who can dominate you with just her clit!  She doesn't even have to be mean, upset, or angry, she can be looking at him with love and affection it's still domination by something big.

After that Julie finds a tall and shows Sam what she is really capable of, over and over and over again.  If he's still able to screw outside his lane, he has a mental condition and can't be blamed and needs new meds.  

The danger is that Julie may like this alot!!!  She doesn't have to hurt a soul, she can change poeple through her influnce and they can all give her her due.  Yes she would make sure everyone was satisfied, but what's wrong with Julie first, Julie most and Julie last?  It wouldn't take much Sam, once at around 40 strokes and a couple of cuddling five strokes and he will be enthralled, then play with Tee, Cindy, Zoe, cuddle and stroke a few times, each time Julie gently mounts it would seem more natural and though the changes wouldn't be as great over time but everyone who 'plays' with Julie will in time be hers and hers alone.  So if you do this to correct Sam's behavior how long before Julie uses it in a more stuble way to have everyone in her haram?

Good chapter, hope Sam takes Julie back and that everything gets fixed.  Thank you.

 



Author's Response:

That's a whole lot, too much in fact to comment on. So I'll just say a hearty thank you for the thoughts. Whether they get back together we'll find out soon enough, really, so be patient.

 

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2018 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Well no major themes to explore, Sam had oral sex, if Julie finds out she will be pissed, but I believe she will understand, She may use it to say you had your turn to get off and I had mine, mine was worse, but for the sake of us all we'll call it even.

He misses Julie, he misses all the women there, if there are graydations of taking back, Juile as a person Yes, Juile as a friend yes, Julie as part of his ongoing life as it was yes(basically before she had her fun) Julie as his bride, that depends on Wilma and Julie.  I just think Sam needing healing and Wilma was there for it, give it five days a bedpost would of worked it would of been Woodma.  Though with two kids Wilma may have been just what he needed just at that time, with the number of chapters left likely a one night stand in which he was help.

Heres hoping the big, normal, small choatic Cook/Morton household reunites under 'Dad' Sam and "Mom" Julie.  good chapter, perhaps we can have on Julie's growth as a person.

 



Author's Response:

Right, no major themes. But Sam had his mini-vacation. Let's hope Julie doesn't find out.

This chapter may be but a blip in Sam's life but we'll be coming back to this episode later, not in a big way but it wil factor. So, stay tuned and thanks again for the comments.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2018 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Of course we are pulling for them, we have 2/3 the story having each help the other.  As for Sam taking her back, first should he forgive her.  It's a separate question, considering who his entire family  and some friends gave him hell(mother switching him, then complete disrespect for being small, father supporting mother until recently, sister screwing him over until juile, he and her well... Jill's actions causing two deaths, his disease, and huge amounts of pain on Zoe, plus her antics before) he's forgiven a lot.  Julie one lied by omission knowing about him being infected by the Borg, could be a simple mistake, but is also a set up for Sam to be further enraged.  Two the sexual assault that's a bit beyond the switching, and on par with Jill.  Sam forgave jill, he should forgive juile.

Two take her back?  Yes if it is good for her.  She has to adjust to her new reality, she has to become something more and from her actions on that night she needs a lot of assistance.  Can she grow better with him being her crutch for everything or if he is there when she needs him and he supports her from time to time, let things breath as it were.  I think they would be better together, he needs to ensure she goes to counseling and find an outlet for her need for control.  Preferably one of the tall woman club or more. 



Author's Response:

I see we have another vote for our couple to get back together. Thanks.

Reviewer: Battlemaster-3d Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2018 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Oh forgot one thing, what would Juile do if by remembering the good she was able to piece together (I know it's just a hypotheis) that she started to grow when she and Sam they had sex, and that she grew each time it happened, and supporting it that the same thing happened with Jill, would she attempt to test it?  If sucessful, well at that point I would worry for Sam's freedom at this point in Juile's devolpment, ironically enough she would likely keep him safe and warm in as gilded of a cage as possible, but though still a person she would see him as more of a resource (which at this point she sees everyone but herself, that or loss).  Juile has to grow into herself, I believe she will have lots of help, until then lets hope that is the hypotheis are correct she doesn't find out what Sam can do, or she will be growing a lot larger, but mentally much slower.



Author's Response:

Without giving too much away, Julie will grow, but as a person, not much more physically. Her physical growth was purely DNA related to her father, being a late bloomer, and hanging inverted. Wait, did I just say hanging inverted? I'm sure that has nothing to do with it.

 

Reviewer: Battlemaster-3d Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2018 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Reading the reviews, everyone seems to want Juile in charge of her club.  NOT GOOD, it sets up a club that could research the virus, basically turning males into growth machines for those women, or at least Sam.  That's what I thought the Tall Woman Club was when you set them up in the middle of the story and ever since we have had 40,000 foot locker stores worth of shoes being droped all heaping woe on poor Sam, is he ever going to catch a break?

I would like Sam and Juile to patch up, if they have to allow space for Juile to grow, but don't turn Juile into Jill in which we get sightings and nothing more until she explodes and messes the who story again.

I do like the concept of helping Juile with her new found powers, I would start historical, how many giants does she know that have influnced the world today?  Other then sports how are they recieved?

Three pictures/videos should be key,

1.  Bible David Vs. Goliath one stone in a skilled man's sling against armor, shield and a giant who was 13' tall not 8'.  Peasent boy with skill and understanding beats large person who never had to look up to anyone, infact he may of taken advantage of Goliath.

2.  Imperial guards, tallest of their country, never had to look up to anyone, always had the highest perspective, were the BIGGEST, enjoyed being big.  Guess what they servered as decorations to inbred royals who served as rubber stamps to compenent civil leaders.  Biggest doesn't mean best, ignoring or belittle those around you cause you have a hieght and mass advantage won't help you grow, use the skills of those around you and caring for them will grow you in more ways then you can phantom.

3. Barney Fife- this or any other bubbling fairly decent person is all it takes to end your term as a Big person.  His one bullet in an old gun is more then sufficent to end you up 25' tall, if it's a rifle it gets worse that is why you can't ignore the feelings of those around you, if the right person in the wrong place with the right equipment is nearly run over by you, or feels they haven't been heard it can end poorly for you.  Even more so then normal people since they don't attarct the attention Juile would.

Thats all my hypothesis for now, BTW how many chapters are you intending to write, it's a long stroy and it gone through her growth, his misery and added to his misery them potentailly breaking up.  With some disease elements to it.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Julie is still the new gal in the club so if she does succeed in getting in charge it will take a while.

It seems the votes for Julie and Sam getting back together are overwhelming. I can chalk up another vote.

Points (1) and (2) I can understand. But you threw me for a loop with (3). Barney Fife, huh? Very interesting and something to think about.

I had planned much less chapters than I have now but it sort of got out of hand. I do have a plan for where this is going and I think another 10 to 15 chapters to go. However, they will be shorter from here on out.

Thanks again for the review and I hope you like what's to come.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2018 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Intresting chapter,

Juliie likes being big, Julie I would gues would like to be bigger, and she is becoming aware of her power.

Ideally her and Sam stick it out, but I think the danger has passed for Borgfield victims house, I think Julie has her sights sent on the Tall Woman's club.

What happen to Sam was a test of her power (she admitted it, and experiment), continued tests to folks like Sam(assult and battery, sexual assult), Zoe, Erin even Jill (if Jill didn't kill her first)(all women rape), would only get law enforcement involved and ethier end her incaricated, unable to grow and highlighted as both a sex offender and a giantess to be contained, not what she wants and not what she needs.

I believe a much more satisifying test would be to pick a 'small' Tall and completely dominiate her in a way she couldn't do with Sam.  To start marking the club as hers and hers alone.

She can be nice and gentle with Sam and the family, help with chores, drive, ect.  cause what she is really doing is rebuilding her network, getting Sam to help with her college selections (she should go if only to boarden her influnce in another area), and maybe tution, or grants/loans (that whole why shouldn't I take advantage thing), Sam on his worst day after what she did would still help her with that.  Talk with Zoe about her field, speak with the doctors, she started to grow when she and Sam did it, maybe the inversion table is a catalyst for the virus, allows it to go where it is need for her to GROW.  Basically keep her nose clean, smile, learn and network from the embrassment of riches she has there.

Once she gains control of the Tall club, do the same thing slightly less nice (use them for all her experimentail 'urges') use thier connections and contact to further her influnance.

She Wants to grow, to do so means understanding the virus, so use her growing influnance, power and connection to do that.  Direct them to work toward a true cure (don't want anyone follow her footsteps do we).

As she devolps from being selfishly aware of her power she will gain an understand of her responiblities (at the least keep the serfs happy so they feed her) and the core Julie who is nice, kind, sweet and gently should be able to expand and merge with her confident and strong persona.

If Sam wants to go(I hope not), let him, but don't let him go completely, he will always have her back and in time her friend could again become something so much more, espeacilly after she has helped found a cure.

So in essence Julie, don't commit crimes or stupid personality fights, think of the duck arguments flow off your back, enemenies like Zoe and Jill may just stab you in it.  Besides only those opionion you need or agree matter, anything else is a gentle wind blowing.  Grow broaden, strengtheb relationships and network with everyone and use the Tall Club as your release, don't think you can subjagate those girls enough.

To sum it's all about making friends and influcaning poeple.  to quote "make new friends but keep the old, one is silver the other gold".  Oh and don't forget to take your birthcontrol pills they should help your influnance (and GROWTH) as well.

And please Sam take her back.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

You all have lots of thoughts and theories. I like the "pick a 'small' Tall and completely dominiate her in a way she couldn't do with Sam" idea. It's interesting. Right now Julie is still the new girl in town, so to speak, in the club. Her influence can only grow, however, like her physical growth, so we'll see where this takes her.

The question still remains at this point: will Sam take her back? 

Thanks for the ideas and the feedback.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2018 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

The question for Julie is this, everyone even her new clique is overpowered by her, no one can force her to do a damn thing.  So with this power who is better to be at her side so she can use it and perhaps grow even more? 

Some flighty 7 footers more concerned with parties, she can party anytime.  Some large women ordering drinks, please she's been drinking good wine before she legally could.  Some cliquely girls who worry about a man's size?  Please if she agrees with them or she doesn't they are all going to kiss her ass.

No, she needs someone who will tell her the truth, even if he knows she might litterally pound him for it.  Someone who knows she may brush off, but not before he's given her everything bit of knowledge he has.  Someone who couldn't last five seconds against her would stand as long as he could so things might be better for her.

The Tall girls are in for a good time, having a good time is easy.  Sam and the rest know the hard work need to provide for that good time and understand even though they are small to put forth the effort and not judge by size alone.

Julie knows that having smoke blown up her ass isn't going to get her anywhere.  That's what the Tall Club will do, give her five minutes she will own it.

Julies knows if she wants to she can ignore, crush, carry away, basically do anything to Sam but he will always provide her with his best.

It as simple as it gets, JULIE IS THE BOSS, she owns everything, which employees will work for her and which will curry favor.  Which will meet their tasks and which will complain the boss is dating some one too small.  Which will work to make her more powerful and which will worry about dinner plans?  Julie I believe knows.

Julie likes being big, no doubt she wants to get bigger now, who made her large in the first place, who supported her while she grew, and who will support her now even if he believes she is aleady to freakishly large? Sam.  The Tall Club will fear her continued growth, will take step to stop it and at best be ineffective as compared to Sam and the others.  Here we have the beginings of elighted self-intrest in Julies may it and her grow.



Author's Response:

Interesting thoughts. Cliuquey girls worry about man's size? News to me. Not. Every girl worries about a man's size. LOL. The tall girls are certainly n for a good time but they see Julie as one of their own and want her to have a good time too. But, they're big. Others will do the work for them. They deserve it, so they think. We'll be learning more about them soon enough.

I'm happy you're enjoying the story. I hope you like where this goes. There will be more twists and turns to it soon though. 

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2018 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Just considering things one at a time, I will deal with the next chapter and her persona next time.

Dating, simple, next to impossible, her clique has their standards, she has what Sam has done for her over and over again.  Her clique's are easier rich, tall, dressing nice, hers are harder some one to care for her, who will be there for her, who will support her.  The standards are the easy part, anyone under six feet aint getting near her, those around seven espeacilly famous ones may date her to 'do' her, well once or twice, males might begin to spread the statement "Dude she's a Dude" after seeing her hot dog.  Those folks have plenty of options and leaving a cute, stacked fit 8 foot tall woman, or taking her once and going well par for the course.  Everyone her clique wants her to be with will have better options espeacilly if she apes or becomes like them.  Any one like Sam will be driven out and possibly provide Zoe with another story if not providing Julie a court date.  So one night stands, Clique members (not sure if they will actually) or home alone.  A good man may try, but unless she grows as a person it will never work, she has love now, it looks from the author's comments she's going to throw it away, when you do that it becomes ever harder to find it again(already twice with Sam), regerts pile up and maybe she stops trying...  It will also get ever more difficult if she continues to grow, 8 feet is an outlier, 8'2 she can't even stand in buildings and has become a freak.

Thank you for your time. 



Author's Response:

So, it's kind of neat having a group accept you, want you and want you to hang with them. It's flattering. I know you'd be flattered, especially if they were young, pretty, strong and tall. Don't tell me you wouldn't feel good about it, Bigdawg.

So, maybe you can understand how Julie is feeling. She feels good and probably doesn't know they're brainwashing her. They probably don't even know, the arrogant bitches they are.

Yep, she's become alpha alright, but hasn't quite realized it herself. And she hasn't quite realized what Sam has done for her, or rather she's forgotten, but is slowly remembering.

You called Julie a freak! Oh my. I hope she doesn't hear that. She just might pummel you into the ground. It wouldn't be pretty.

Thanks for the continued reviews.

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Great Story

As so many have concluded Sam and Julie relationship is the heart and soul of this story.  In order for this epic to ring true they must find a way to fix this, stay together and both of them grow ever better and more loving toward the other.  They need to stay a couple.

Wondering what Julie is getting out of being a 10 Foot plus giantess, her new "friends" seem more then happy to heap woe on her.  Her domaniance (as you said feeling her oats, that she seems to do that every 10 chapters I will put aside), hieght and strength advantage are there but are they worth it?  Espeacilly considering she use them in a manner like her father when assulting Sam?  The novelity and joy if from growing if they exist have to have worn thin, perhaps she is begining to hate being an oversized freak in a world she doesn't fit into, maybe after her assult is begining to hate having those 'pluses' of domanince and power.

Would she consider having Jill find a way to infect her with Borgsford and reblance things?  She would show great commitment to Sam (espeacilly after her hiding the knowledge that he has the disease) and she would be with a group of people who love her, also she would get sex alot(considering she seems to have had a dry spell while sam was tapping everything around him), the majority of it from Sam, if the inverse table works they could slowly regrow her, make sure step by step she handling her issues rather then thinking it's normal she feels anger and a willingness to act on it with as she grows.

I would like the character to be happy and at 10 feet plus she just seems miserable, I don't think she's getting anything new or better by growing, I think she feels trapped by her size, and she has glimpses of insight that she's hurting those she cares for and love, espeacilly the one who loves her unconditionally Sam.  It might be wise for her, Zoe, or Jill to say hey this lifestyle isn't making you happy, maybe being infected with Borgsford can reblance you, let you live amongst those who love you (Partilurally Sam) and if you want to grow back the inverse table is always there, but you will have knowledge what you did wrong the first time and how to avoid.

To sum, I doubt Julie is happy being a giantess, her new "friends" I think don't care, she's just a member of the pack, her old friends when they find out about Sam will be hurt, scared and possible dislike her, if she were to willingly become one of them it would be a hell of an act of contrition coming to their level after being so high above them.  She deserves to be happy and a shrinking back down would help.

Also regardless of anything else they are a great couple (Sam and Julie), they need to stick it out and fix things.



Author's Response:

Yep, Julie and Sam are at the heart of the story. Can they find a way to fix this is one question, but first, do they want to fix this?

I don't see her new friends as heaping woe on her, rather, they see her as part of their group as superior girls who deserve the best, whether that is fine food, wine and even boys. To them, Sam just doesn't measure up and Julie can do so much better. Julie, of course, is flattered and this is probably why she listens and starts believing their rhetoric. She hasn't stopped to ask why, at least not yet.

Julie for her part is starting to become more comfortable in her new size and just starting to find out the power she possesses to influence others. She will likely grow into the leader of the girls in her new group in the future, but right now doesn't have a clue. It's funny you mention her father. He will be showing up, although not in person, for a small role later.

What if Jill or Julie become infected themselves with the disease? That would be a real interesting twist wouldn't it? Of course Sam is past the point where he can infect others; it can only be passed on during the incubation period where you don't even you know have the virus -- that is unless you get tested. Kind of like HIV, no?

Thanks, Last_one_33. You have a good understanding of the couples situation and raise some good points. Idon't want to give anything away so we'll find the answers in the coming chapters.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Rereading Bedtime 73

I think more then ever the main Couple should reconcile and move forward with their relationship.

Why? Julie actually showed restraint, she was a spotted Hynea marking her much weaker male mate, but considering the size and strength difference she HAD to have worked on not hurting him.  She was 5x as strong back in chapter 41, she having atleast stayed the same and him shrinking like 7x to 8x if not more.  For her to pin him and use her clit being as angry as she was, he should of came out of it with at least a broken bone and interal bleeding, consider he and Zoe shared pleasentaries I think we know physcially Julie restrained herself, hell if she thrusted her clit in the wrong postion or with too much vigor Sam's large intestents would be bleeding and his hip shattered (let alone her roughly 100lbs of hips against his two).  If she didn't show restraint Sam would be dead or badly maimed, if she was actively trying to kill him it would of been over in seconds.

Also, in the build it is obivous she is jealous, complains about him being happy after dancing, says something about him needing a hunderd women, says he can't satify her at this size, but she can't satisfy him either, gets offended at JUST HER.  Her new friends are getting her insecruties peaked, and she has a shoot first ask questions latter streak in her.  What she did was wrong, and what she did to dominate Sam during was even worse, but it was to mark her mate, not kill, or even injure.  She felt she had to subjagate him, humilate him, but once it was over she knew she was wrong.

She needs to have some serious anger management counseling, and if she is going to be jealous use that dominance in a good way and tell Sam, this is now one on one, no more making me wait (at least chapters 68-73) what a month before you service me, that and him servicing anyone else at all likely didn't help her state of mind.

She does need help, I don't think this giantess thing is what she wants, she's being 'friends' with folks who don't seem to see a problem in making her miserable, likely cause they are miserable as well.  She doesn't fit in the world, she frightens poeple which after a while must be more annoying then 'cool'.  Her size and mass make her a hazzard to her friends and since she isn't on a battlefield it really doesn't help much besides moving (and that's only on the outside).  I don't doubt there are times she likes being the biggest most dominate being but again that has to ware thin over time.  

I think Sam after he recoups a bit will be fair, he will give her at least a Jill moment and I think Julie will rise to the occeasion(hopefully she will be talking to at least friends and family on how to fix this, if not getting counseling).  They are the main couple and the source of most of whats good in this story I for one want them to reconcile, correct and thrive.

Thanks



Author's Response:

Sam has always been fair. But this time he was greatly hurt. Do you think he'll be able to forgive Julie? Do you think Julie wants it? These questions will be answered soon but it will take a few chapters for us to find out.

It seems every reviewer is pulling for Julie and Sam. I hope I don't disappoint.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Also, since the last review was long and focused on what ifs, I would love Julie and Sam to remain together if that makes any sort of difference...  Thank you.



Author's Response:

We'll have to wait and see if they stay together or not. I'm flabergasted by the vote from those in the reviews who want to see them stay together. Thanks all.

Reviewer: dragonslave0666 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

I really appreciate the response. Thank you. I wouldntwomind Julie being a little more dominate like this chapter. But I just hope they can work it out between them.



Author's Response:

I think Julie has been shy all along because of being small, quiet and submissive all her life. Growing has left her in a position to be dominant one in any group but it took her a while to realize and grow into this new persona. She's just now starting to "feel her oats". But, has she gone too far this time?

Reviewer: dragonslave0666 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

I would love to see Julie grow more. Maybe even Sam shrink more. I just dont want to see these two split up. I more interaction between the two. They need to stay together. They really are my favorite couple. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like them as a couple. Will they stay together or not? We'll just have to wait and see. But I don't think we'll have to wait too long. I'm happy you're following their story and I appreciate the feedback. I do take the comments to heart. That might give you an idea where this is going.

Reviewer: dragonslave0666 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Reunion

I really liked this chapter. I love what happened with sam and Julie. However I dontdowant them to split up. I think they are the best couple. I would love to see more time with sam and Julie.

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