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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2017 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

You have an interesting and somewhat unusual story here, but there is something that becomes very noticeable before too long: You desperately need a proof reader to catch all the mis-keying. That is something that can become very irritating after only a short period of reading. Not only is it unprofessional, but sometimes it can lead to a reader asking "What the hell is he/she saying here?" when a misspelling turns into another real word with a completelly opposite meaning. The easiest proof-reading is to reread what you've written, correcting your mistakes yourself.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the information. I am a novice writer and don't have a lot of time in my schedule due to school and society, but I will do much better in the future. I also don't have access to a computer often so I'm doing it all on my phone.

Reviewer: Fluffer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2017 5:50 AM Title: Character Bios

Thanks. Hopefully it'll be in my mind by next week. Do you have any ideas for the exposition.

Reviewer: Shaman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 2:51 AM Title: Character Bios

Sounds interesting. Looking forward to the first chapter

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