Reviews For KonoSuba [AEB]
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Reviewer: Undealtwith193 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2019 7:10 AM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

I cant help but feel bad for poor Aqua D,:



Author's Response:

To be fair she brings most of it on herself, but it's not like Wiz is going to maliciously toment her

Reviewer: Mr-War Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2019 6:03 AM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

Amazing story! :D

 

Are you currently available for requests?



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 

I don't actually <i>really</i> do request, since this is just something I do in my free time to relax.  I am open to story suggestion and if I like the idea I'll run with it though.

Reviewer: Feeover Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2019 11:13 PM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

It is good to have you back writing those awesome chapters.

Author's Response:

Good to be back! :D

Reviewer: Teniko Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2017 4:02 AM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

Aqua got lucky this time xD Poor Megumin



Author's Response:

She gets a few breaks every now and then... classic misdirection :)

Reviewer: Teniko Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 6:38 AM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

Nice additions :D Looking forward to seeing what Megumin has planned for poor Chris :P



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I hope to meet your expectations.

Reviewer: Inwiththebooks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 12:57 PM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

Multisize is a rather underused bit if you ask me so its nice to see it here. As for character wise I know the hardest part of these types pf stories is keeping to the original personalities. Thus far I'd say you've done a good job of that, a bit of rigidness here or there but otherwise nothing that takes me out. Gives me a few ideas of things to write actually so my thanks haha.



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear your praise, thank you very much.  Without sufficent planning and awareness it can be a hassle to keep track of who is what size, but it is rewarding so long as it works.  That I'm also able to keep all the character true to their source material is also nice to hear, if I were to stray too far from their established personalities it would defeat the purpose of using them.

But the best praise of all is that I have inspired you to write yourself.  I wouldn't even be writing my own stories if not for the works of users like Duggernaut, Silent-One, newschool2626 and many others.  Again, thank you, happy reading and good luck with whatever you write!

Reviewer: Inwiththebooks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2017 9:34 AM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

As one that greatly enjoys Konosuba, decent fanfiction, and games of chance this story has very much tickled my fancy. I've got to say I agree with your response on the previous, never enough Aqua bullying. Ever. I'll be following this one for a bit I think.

 

Cheers



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I'm thrilled to hear I was able to hit so many points with you.  Oh, Aqua still has two more rounds to get through, and let's just say she is in for a rough time :)  I look forward to hearing from you again in the future.

Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2017 10:33 PM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

I love Konosuba, so i was naturally interested in this story. I wasn't expecting much from it, but I am glad that i was wrong, because these two chapters have been incredibly enjoyable. The characters seem true to there anime/manga counter parts which is great for such a colorful cast like this. I prefer feet and vore, but I still did enjoy the but crush. I also enjoy futanari, but thought that Wiz having such a huge dick was a bit too silly, other than that i enjoyed what you have shared with us.



Author's Response:

I alway love to hear that I am able to keep the characters true to their source material, so thank you very much for the seal of approval.  Feet and Vore will be showing up in the coming chapters, and while it isn't mentioned in any of the cards descriptions now that I think about it, any card that alters or adds something to the target is decided by the user, thus I thought Aqua would want to inconvenience Wiz as much as possible but still that is my fault for not clarifying.

Reviewer: Niggle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2017 2:41 PM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

Really good story so far and I'm definitely looking forward to see what else gets drawn, but after looking at your list of card effects a question popped into my head and wouldn't leave me alone.

 

Does the permanence card only effect ongoing things or could it be used on someone who for instance had been previously been targeted by a crush card (foot,breast,butt any of those) to make them be constantly crushed? (By the one who was originally chosen as the recipient ofc)

 

Silly question but like I said it was just something that I suddenly thought of, as depending on how the next few chapters go and the characters that may play this game in future stories it's something I can see the more sadistic girls doing.

 

Any who keep up the brilliant writing and I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter (also I'm wondering if Aqua is going to end up getting crushed/consumed by the massive girlcock she's given Wiz).



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  In answer to your question, yes the permanency card does only work with ongoing cards like the Grow and Shrink cards or basically anything at lasts longer than 'a few seconds' as the cards descriptions detail.

Honestly I posted the list of cards and effects so anyone could know what to expect coming into this series but I also understand that I may have left some of the entries vague unintentionally because I understand how I intend to use them so if you have any more questions please feel free to ask.

As for Aqua, well I'm trying to keep with the theme of the show, so...

Reviewer: The Micro Giant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2017 11:40 AM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

I'm really enjoying this so far! Konosuba's one of my favorite shows and I look forward to what debacherous acts the girls get up to!

 

I'm also hoping to see some extreme shrinking based on that nano tag! I did love seeing Darkness get buttcrushed by Chris and can't wait for more size change



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it.  There is a ton of shrinking and size manipulation coming so I hope the coming chapters are just as enjoyable.

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2017 12:42 PM Title: Shall We Play a Game?

Great, I love those tags, Reiko-samaa's videos and specially KonoSuba so I'm really looking forward to this one! For now it's a good start.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm because KonoSuba has such dynamic and characters I just hope I can keep everyone's mannerisms in tact.  Especially Aqua.

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