[Report This]Date: October 28 2020 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 23: Understanding
OK I KNOW THIS IS LIKE MY THIRD REVIEW SHUT UP
BUT
Are you posting a lot to make up for two months of ghosting (I'm not complaining). ALSO if you abandon this story because of anything short of death I'm going to be very disappointed. The last time that happened was (seemingly) twice, once with a story called Adamic Ring which hasn't been updated since last year and once with a story that was part of an alleged triology called "Nami". First story posted 8 years ago then abandoned AND BOTH THOSE STORIES HAVE OVERARCHING PLOT AND I'M STILL NOT OVER IT AFTER ALL THIS TIME. It's why I've learned trust only leads to pain and the sad part is I'm not joking.
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*sobs*
Author's Response:
yeah i'm compensating for my short disappearance with daily chapters for the week, i feel like it's the best way to get back into a semi-regular pattern of writing as time goes on. if i write a chapter a day this week, a chapter every three or four later on won't feel so pressing. I'm gonna be honest when I say that I have a lot of stuff on my plate right now since I'm starting to apply to colleges, so I can't guarantee with certainty that I won't vanish without a trace for a while, but I can promise that so long as I'm alive, I'll eventually return to write another chapter. I don't think anything can really top the 2017-2020 hiatus at this point anyhow, for better or worse
Date: October 28 2020 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 23: Understanding
Stay small, Volkhard. Stay small and you'll stay happy
missing a quotation mark. Also damn doesn't it suck when some random bitch preys on the fact you mass murder innocents left and right and calls out the bullshit cope you use to keep from going insane? Hate when that happens. "The magic extended my lifespan and youth" KEEP COPING YOU LIAR
>She had made sure to instruct Teagan, Hassan, and Aaliyah
Teagan should be Sihil.
>safety not only for herself, but for Sihil as well
You know, assuming the others won't rightfully slaughter a tomkin in a second.
... CONFOUND THIS PLOT GROWING EVER MORE GREY AND ALSO COMPLEX
Also from like two chapters ago I realized basically in my sleep as one often does, Teagan let that "middle aged bearded soldier" go absolutely because he looked like her father, despite the fact he died when she was like five which means it's been 15 years and I can't remember my own father's face despite the fact it's been 12 years do i wanna talk about it no.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for proofreading for me lmaooo i was too tired to do it myself so i just hoped i hadnt made any errors
and im going to be honest, i really wasn't thinking about teagan's father when I first wrote that scene but I decided to go back and edit the tomkin's appearance retroactively because I thought it would be a neat callback so I'm glad you caught it (if i was a reader i probably wouldn't have)