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Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2017 11:30 AM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity

This is a awesome story. I hope Elsa doesn't betray Annie later on in the story. I was also wondering, how come you didn't use the FF/f and FF/m size role tags?

Author's Response:

Tanks! I don't have plans for that happening, so don't worry.

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 5:53 PM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity

Totally overlooked this. Great stuff, fascinating characters and development. I love Annie's ditsy character.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot. I'm having a lot of fun writing this, and trying to be more detalied, without rushing too quicly to the good stuff.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2017 12:56 AM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity

I read your other story, which was good. This one is even better. More detailed, scarier.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2017 12:55 PM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity

Please consider adding the mother squashing the 5 guys in addition to what your doing? I think it would be great. The feeling of oh we're saved to ewww bugs, squash is a great feeling.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2017 12:24 AM Title: CHAPTER I – A New Opportunity

Great set up. Where are the boys?Will she figure it out? Hope so.

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