Reviews For Warming Up
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Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Some fun stuff, and whoever voted it down was a serious ass. Keep it on up Emma

Reviewer: xefron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Super AWSOME!

Reviewer: Zanderas Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good short story with a nice twist at the end. I really liked the switching between view points from the various characters, though it got a bit jarring near the end with it sometimes being hard to tell whos pov we were looking from.

 

I was a bit sad we didn't get to see Cathrine do a bit of squishing, but the twist in her being part of the scheme was a nice surprise. And damn that micro/giga scene was well done. Those are hard to do right, but you pulled it off.

 

My only real big complaint was Cathrine didn't get trapped in the shoe for a bit longer and slowly get squished, but meh. Still good

Reviewer: redfiredog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey, you actually wrote something!

This was a great little self-contained story. Good interactions, good characters, and some delightfully cruel interactions. I'm usually not a big fan of microscopic sizes, but you did a good job making it feel plausible.

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