[Report This]Date: February 05 2017 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Pixis, I knew you were going to say that. There's nothing wrong with being into all gentle stuff. I am not suggesting to go full "violence and destruction and sinister motivations" either. That would utterly destroy this story, the way it is set up. I would like to see the story just an inch further away from perfect rainbow land. All that takes is like one wrong that isn't immediately rectified.
Date: February 04 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
please keep at it
[Report This]Date: February 04 2017 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting world and story.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: February 03 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really Good setting, Keep it up!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was re-watching LOST recently and was inspired....
Date: February 02 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm a big fan of your Parvian stories so I'm very excited for a continuing narrative in that world. This looks great so far. I love Desi's internal monologue and the scene of Mary climbing up onto her face.
Judging from the vore tag, I think I can guess what just happened at the water source. If someone went down the hatch, hopefully Desi can cough them back up.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I don't often write from the giantess' perpsective, so that was a fun change of pace. I think you're going to like Chapter 2. It's written already, so I'll probably post it in the next day or so.