[Report This]Date: January 30 2017 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome story! I like how the girls are generally kind and protective of Neville. Sure, they have selfish desires for their own improvement, but not at the expense of Neville's comfort. That could be seen with the insertion in this chapter. It must've taken incredible willpower for Vivian to pace her movements, but she did, ensuring that she didn't harm him. Perhaps their psychic link aids with this.
I also noticed Neville eat a lot. Perhaps once he gets small enough, they'll give him time to rest and recouperate. At that point, he may be able to regain weight and size by eating.
Hopefully the girls don't get too powerful tho. Maybe their gains will fade until getting a recharge. Hmm, so many possibilities.
Thanks for sharing this story!