Date: February 10 2017 2:27 PM Title: And Now on with the Show
I really enjoyed your descriptions of what Lew was physically feeling as he was shrinking... and his state of mind after... Nicely done!
Author's Response:
Thank you Shrinkmeister I am trying to portray Lew with vivid descriptions without beating people over the head with the thoughts tumbling through his head
[Report This]Date: February 08 2017 5:54 PM Title: And Now on with the Show
I really like the spin you've added as well as the refinement of Lew's emotions. Keep mit up!
Author's Response:
Thanks Duggernaut I hope I've fleshed out Lew enough without making him too sappy.
Date: February 07 2017 2:41 AM Title: And Now on with the Show
This story is awesome! Great build up and I can't wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response:
Thanks TinyBrad I think we all have some inkling what's in store for Lew...
[Report This]Date: February 06 2017 8:41 PM Title: And Now on with the Show
He was obviously too scared to consider the possibility that Sadie wouldn't want to end her fun with him THAT quickly! She wants to play some cat-and-mouse games with him first. Or should I say... "p***y" games?*
*Dang those proximity censors!
Author's Response:
Hi Carycomic yeah I think Lew hadn't considered Sadie is just starting her fun.