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Reviewer: The Lurkmeister Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2017 2:41 PM Title: In the Darkness of space

I wish I caught this story sooner. Masterful buildup to some very satisfying and wonderfully described size play. I love the Sadie character and her playfulness. Very well written story. I'd love to see a sequel. :-)

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2017 10:03 PM Title: Damned If You Don't

My only criticism is that it ended too quick. I am hoping you end up writing a part 2. I would really like to see some more Sadie X Lew interaction.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the input Recoveringlurker. I am wrestling at this point of the story. We shall see

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2017 2:27 PM Title: And Now on with the Show

I really enjoyed your descriptions of what Lew was physically feeling as he was shrinking... and his state of mind after... Nicely done!



Author's Response:

Thank you Shrinkmeister I am trying to portray Lew with vivid descriptions without beating people over the head with the thoughts tumbling through his head

Reviewer: Duggernaut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2017 5:54 PM Title: And Now on with the Show

I really like the spin you've added as well as the refinement of Lew's emotions. Keep mit up!



Author's Response:

Thanks Duggernaut I hope I've fleshed out Lew enough without making him too sappy.

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2017 11:34 PM Title: Damned If You Don't

Good start with the shrinking. Curious to see where this goes. Im into the core stuff, so I'll enjoy if he gets swallowes. But I kind of hope he doesn't. He's portrayed as a decent guy trying to do the right thing even if he wants to do the bad. And he tried to be respectful to her. So I'd love to see some mouth play and teasing, but ultimately not being eaten. Could be interesting to see her grow him back, and tell her mother how good he was, so she begins putting more responsibility on him and he has to watch her more often, so he constantly gets shrunk, played with, and regrown.

 

Will continue to read and enjoy no matter where you take it though



Author's Response:

Thanks Cameron99 despite Sadie's initial impression of Lew she has now taken a shine to him and intends to have some fun. As for Lew, he just really wants to be hself again. The next couple of chapters will see where this ultimately goes.

Reviewer: TinyBrad Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2017 2:41 AM Title: And Now on with the Show

This story is awesome! Great build up and I can't wait to see what comes next!



Author's Response:

Thanks TinyBrad I think we all have some inkling what's in store for Lew...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 8:41 PM Title: And Now on with the Show

He was obviously too scared to consider the possibility that Sadie wouldn't want to end her fun with him THAT quickly! She wants to play some cat-and-mouse games with him first. Or should I say... "p***y" games?*

*Dang those proximity censors!

Author's Response:

Hi Carycomic yeah I think Lew hadn't considered Sadie is just starting her fun.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 8:33 PM Title: A Glass Half Full

Whoa! I'm off to the next chapter, right away. I'll bet the title of it will be something like "Menace, Anyone?"

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2017 5:09 AM Title: Damned If You Don't

Oh my god! This is making this totally blind man see orgasmic stars burning deeply into my 2 hipnotic brown prosthetic eyes. :) the only part of the story I had trouble with? Was the lack of the next chapter. Haha :) keep up your good work and writing please?

Author's Response:

Thanks Her-chocolatebar I am very glad this story resonates. There will be more very soon.

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2017 1:13 PM Title: Complications

Really terrific storytelling and character development.  Can't wait for more...



Author's Response:

Thanks Shrinkmeister I really appreciate your feedback.  More chapters very soon

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2017 10:59 PM Title: Complications

Home field advantage: Sadie.

Author's Response:

Yessir Lew isn't on the sandlot anymore.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2017 10:55 PM Title: A Glass After Supper

It looks like his old-fashioned wholesomeness is turning her on. Which just goes to show: opposites not only attract. Sometimes, they can arouse, too!

Author's Response:

Thanks Carycomic we know her first impression of Lew wasn't particularly favorable but now that she taken a shine to him, he might be at a disadvantage.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2017 10:52 PM Title: Dinner and a Show

Note to Lew: in the strictest zoological sense? It's "cagna" (feminine of "cane" from the Latin "canis").

Reviewer: Duggernaut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2017 5:46 PM Title: Damned If You Don't

I like how you're putting this together. Good job!



Author's Response:

I appreciate it so much. You know.

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 30 2017 11:22 PM Title: Damned If You Don't

Well written. Enjoying the slow burn to the shrinking with the two getting to know each other. Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks Cameron99, the burn is about to turn, shortly.

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2017 7:03 PM Title: Damned If You Don't

Solidly written. Hope to see more soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks Recoveringlurker, I will be uploading another chapter very soon.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2017 10:11 AM Title: Bitch - Formerly Known as Princess

It seems like she's going to shrink him, but we don't actually know whose vagina he's in at the beginning. That could be the aftermath of this encounter, or a future one with another woman. Let's see what it turns out to be.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review  Ancient Relic. You are absolutely right. We know Lew winds up small so story becomes how.

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2017 10:54 PM Title: Bitch - Formerly Known as Princess

Not sure about where the story is headed. Feel in the dark really. Pei unusual.

I have to say Lew is probably now one of my all time favorite characters in a story. Crazily fleshed out personality. I feel like I know the dude.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I think a character with meat on his bones, good or bad, helps make the story more entertaining. As for where the story is going, we have to cover the ground between where Lew is and the opening lines of the story. Should be fun!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2017 8:24 PM Title: Bitch - Formerly Known as Princess

Hmmmmmm! This has to be the first duel of wits I ever saw where the challenged party was less well-armed than the challenger. And, yet, it still ended in a bigger stalemate than the Korean War.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Is it really a duel when the outcome is almost a certainty the proverbial knife to a gun fight? Though in this case more like bringing a pillow to a nuclear weapons fight. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2017 8:18 PM Title: Willing to go that Extra Mile

Good question, Lew. I think the answer is: "A whole big world of trouble."

Emphasis on the "big."

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Carycomic I think maybe,  "A whole world of big trouble."

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