Date: April 09 2017 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 18
Very well written and intressting plot but i have to admit i was dissapointed to only reach one accidently aproach to the southern region of tor (her pussy) and some g-rated breastplay in 18 chapters while placed alot more kinky tags into your story information.
I mean its ok when not every story out here is filled near burst with sexual interactions but then those stories shouldnt include more tags then, gentle and giantess, perhaps fantasy aswell.
Or was the short mention of antie junes chaireating butt the reason for the butt tag to your story info.. or perhaps the mentioned butt of the horses?
I actually hate such missleading informations. And so readed 18 chapters about a giantess story with butt in the tags without even ever got the main giantess butt mentioned. The description of her ended at her waistline...
Author's Response: As I said in the beginning of the story, this is a story with some smut. Not a smut with a bit of plot. I am going to fulfill all the tags. It will just take time. All those fun tags will be filled out in detail.
Date: April 02 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
"My people are peaceful." Allows a massive stallion to bleed her brother. Keep in mind how hard it is to get good medical care in this time. And how much bacteria is on Idiots teeth. Also has killed countless humans by kicking them across a camp. It's not so much the reason why but it's Tor's disregard for life that speaks volumes for her kind. Her brother doesn't seem to fond this outlandish, either.
Jason will not forgive this. I hope he doesn't do anything to Idiot. Speaking of which how does a horse hate a certain gender? Seems like a bit of a problem of you want to sell it:
Tor: "So he's about nine years old, strong, and fast. Great endurance, you would be remiss not to buy it."
Buyer: "I love it, it would be a great gift for my brother!"
Tor: "Oh... you mean a man would ride Idiot?"
Buyer: "Yes why?"
Tor: "We don't have a refund policy just so you know."
Haha! Yeah, good thing she doesn't plan to sell him, but use him as a breeding stud.
As for bleeding Jason, probably not the brightest ideas. She does have Eric, a very vulnerable little human, to look out for. And now she's pissed off what could possibly be his biggest threat. We shall just see what happens!
Thank you for your steadfast readership of this story. I am truly flattered by it.
Date: April 02 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Now, Mick totally seems like the type who gets easily bullied, doesn't he ?
As for what Tor did, well I find it obvious that Jason is going to come back to get back at her... and Eric will be the target of his revenge. No matter what angle I look at this, it definitely wasn't a clever thing to do...
She's going to need some sort of leverage to use in the future against her brothers if she wants to guarantee Eric's safety if she decides to stay at the camp.
Thanks for the chapter !
Oh the things her brothers will do... I'm glad you enjoy my story and am flattered you follow it so faithfully. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 02 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I wasn't expecting an entire 2 paragraphs from Idiot's point of view! It didn't reveal much that we don't already know, but it's very interesting to see how he bears grudges (quite like his owner, I guess)
It's quite sad that Mick is obviously the meekest of the siblings, yet even he gets more respect from his brothers than his sister. It's nice to see that at least he does care for her, in his own submissive way. I hope good things happen for the little wuss.
I find it a little odd that Tor is so defensive towards her oldest brothers, even telling them to stay away from her, yet she still seems to follow them? I realise they're at a show (I think?) but maybe she'll ditch them after it's all done. Or maybe she stays for her twin, IDK.
I'm glad you liked my fanart over on Deviantart. I have plans for another one, but work is a priority, after all!
Cowards rarely have happy endings in westerns, just remember that. ;) Only the bold thrive. As for Tor, all her reasons for staying will be revealed. We've just about reached the halfway point in the story. There is going to be a lot more fun to come in chapters ahead!
Thanks for your review. I eagerly await more fanart from you.
Date: April 02 2017 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm still with you, enjoying every word... There are so few writers who can turn a GTS story into a western, demonstrating a knowledge of the old west traditions and life, while mixing it with another genre completely, and making it all work. The lack of respect for women, in the case of some men, (her oldest brother, among others) and the resulting aggressive defense on Tor's part help to make the story more real to me.
Keep up the good work... I'll be here following along.
Thank you so much! Your reviews are always flattering. I'm glad you're enjoying my story so much.