[Report This]Date: February 21 2017 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to reveal that her brothers frequently kidnap criminals from jails and either eat them or enslave them. Keep in mind, in this kind of time period, you could be jailed for being in debt, speaking out of turn, or some other ridiculous charge.
So this is not a medieval time period then if there are firearms. And well past the primitive stages of guns as well, as rifles came after muskets. Judging from the availability the time period would be equivalent to pre Civil War America. No revolvers, interesting.
Funny enough if giants actually existed they would be very vulnerable to guns and even bows. They would not be difficult to hit, even for a novice, and due to their size they would be hard pressed to remove an arrow or a bullet.
Author's Response: The time period I was aiming for was old west/pre-civil war. So glad I did well. As for being susceptible to human weaponry, I always figured a thicker layer of skin and clothes would be enough to prevent most things from affecting them. Also, I figured magnets could pull out embedded shards or bullets. Tor's brothers come into the scene within the next few chapters. Hope you're ready! And for an Elder who is Tor's opposite in demeanor. ;) Maybe he can sway your opinion just a bit. Thanks for the review! I always look forward to yours. They give me a whole different perspective. And one that I should try to keep in mind!
Date: February 20 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
> The princeling looked a little crestfallen at that. "Because I'm yours?" he tried.
Awwww <3
I got the feeling that since his kidnapping, Princeling is quickly accepting his place as her property, even if he doesn't want to admit it yet.
I also think he might secretly enjoy the fact that he has someone to protect him, and that's why he didn't want guns - just my interpretation though.
Also fun to see more of Princeling interacting with other Elders this chapter!
> "Being a lady isn't fun. Being a woman in a man's world is."
Weirdly, this made me realise how Tor rarely seems to get along with anyone - all the men she interacts with are described as either old or ugly, and women are weak or shrill.
I'm excited to see what Tor's brothers are like in person, and what their humans are like!
Author's Response: Good point! That is changing slightly in the next chapter. Interaction-wise, I mean. As for her brothers, within the next few they will show up! It won't be long now. As always, thank you for reviewing! It means a lot.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2017 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for the chapter!
I like how Tor likes Eric but treats him as a pet. Sometimes he tends to forget his position.
Indeed looking forward to what will happen with the brothers, and what's awaiting Eric. I hope we'll see Tor also dealing with their human pets in her own way... And that Eric won't need the gun^^
Author's Response: Well when you coddle and love on and occasionally give in to your pet, they tend to forget their place. As for dealing with the Posse... sometimes Eric might need the guns, sometimes he won't. ;) Tor is very protective, after all. Thanks for your review! It's always appreciated.