Date: March 29 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope she catches and eats the little humans!!
Date: February 12 2017 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
The next chapter will be so soon? You spoil us!
Also wanted to say I liked that he's so conscious of his weight - a lot of works assume that men don't worry about their weight, so it's nice to read something that subverts that! I'm surprised Tor can avoid the temptation of such a nice, plump snack though :P
Author's Response:
Haha! Well, when I can't do much and I refused to bring home papers to grade, what else is there but to write? ;) And I know men are concerned about their weight. I've watched my dad and brothers struggle with theirs for years. So a little bit of them is put into Eric in that way. Plus, I also think it lends a sense of vanity to his character. As for Tor resisting, she has strong willpower. And gets her kicks and cravings elsewhere. As shown in the next chapter. It will be coming soon!
Date: February 12 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens next! And thank you to tingle01 for asking the currency question - I had imagined Tor sprinkling human currency into his hand like grains of sand!
Does Tor realise how young Eric is? I got the impression that since we the audience didn't learn of either characters' ages until relatively recently, that they must not know each other's either - yet this chapter she clearly knows that a human girl is "near his age"
Author's Response:
She's guessed by his facial features and body size as well as attitude his rough age. So, by looking at his face and the face of another, she can guess relative ages. But no, they have not talked explicit ages with each other. That will come up soon. I'm actually working on chapter 13 right now! I hope to have it up this afternoon/evening. Thank you for your review. I always appreciate it. :)
[Report This]Date: February 12 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
Nice chapter. I really do like the interaction between Tor and Eric.
I was a little shocked that Tor has human currency though. Or do humans and Elders use the same currency? The coins should be far too small for the Elders to handle though.
I'm definitely looking forward to what she has in store for Eric's kidnappers, and I hope Eric won't be asking such a foolish thing as 'sparing their lives' once rescued.
Author's Response: I'll explain it a little more in later chapters, but it is Elder currency. It's just the smallest, least valuable coin. To Eric, it would be the size of his chest. Big to him, but not incredibly small to an Elder. As for his rescue, you'll just have to wait and see! I'm aiming to have it posted before Monday. Thanks for your review!