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Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 30: Punishment Period Increased

So good! Olivia is a great addition to the cast of characters; one of my favs



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 30: Punishment Period Increased

Olivia is a special kind of bitch, one that fits in well in your universe.



Author's Response:

Statistically speaking, since she exists at all in my stories, she was bound to be like that at least a little.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2017 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 30: Punishment Period Increased

Maybe it's the temperature, but I'm having trouble linking the title of this chapter to what happens inside it...

On the other hand, toying with the idea of extending a tiny's punishment is something

I've loved since (iirc) LittleLee's pictures, but Maggie has a hard time limit.



Author's Response:

You're right to take the time limit into account. The chapter title is meant more as a callback to the idea that maybe Maggie is being even more indoctrinated into the mindset of this program than Scott thought.

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