[Report This]Date: July 19 2023 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 22: Doing Her a Favor
Re-Reading this story (and series) for the....I can't recall how many times. And I feel I need to leave a comment specifically here.
And I have to say I do hope you come back to it/finish this saga one day in the future.
It's just so freaking good.
I love the gradual but powerful development of the characters and the situation Scott is in just keeps devolving for him.
I have to say, loving the scenarios where he's with the middle aged women (especially their wine addled adventures XD)
But Sylvia has me intrigued, another older woman. But one who's use of Scott isn't as bad, or the very least, she's not actively making it as bad as some of the others.
She's one of the few ' lighter' characters in terms of their treatment of Scott.
But this chapter I keep coming back to as it has me hooked, what is Syliva's plans, what can she do to Judy, what can Scott do if he decides to spill the beans.
I know Judy seems to be on a power trip and is dreaming high.
But could Sylvia be a way out for him...a way out from the torment, of the seemingly never ending (kinky XD) but forced subjegation at the hands of Nancy, or his mother's seemingly aloof nature. (and her own subjegation of him, albeit less erotic in intent)
Sylvia has me intrigued, and I love it. And I enjoy reading her character and her interaction with Scott.
Your writing is always a treat, and a gift, your description, your characters, your erotically charged segments, intercut with the worldbuilding, all make for a wonderful read.
And I do hope you come back to this series in future. I feel it needs a nice cap off. (and Justice for Scott XD I may not get it, but I can dream)....and for some reason, I keep picturing Judy and Nancy under Sylvia's feet.
Date: August 26 2022 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
What is Sylvia's age? Or hight, or foot size.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2022 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 31: Queen-for-a-Day
Hope this gets continued eventually.
Date: April 28 2020 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Do you think you'll ever continue this series?
Date: November 03 2019 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 3: Freshen Up
Ok so Judy enjoys abusing Scott in a sexual way? Why doesn't she ever talk about it? Or even Scott? Would be nice to see more of tis stuff between the two
Author's Response:
The series is largely told in Scott's perspective, so some of those questions are intentionally meant to be left ambiguous. Thanks for reading
Date: June 19 2019 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Not a chance to see this ended? Maybe with little twist in Scott mind as he slowly discovers he secretly like his sister domain (and of course her feet)
Author's Response:
Yeah, this story has been sort of an unfortunate casualty as my focus in the macro-writing community has shifted the last couple years. I wouldn't call it dead, as I still have it mapped out, but I can't promise any definite plans to continue.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 30: Punishment Period Increased
So good! Olivia is a great addition to the cast of characters; one of my favs
Thanks!
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: November 17 2017 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
Awesome writing! All the chapters at the R&R center have been incredible. I love seeing how Judy's master plan is incorporated into the universe you are constructing. Top notch
Author's Response:
Glad to hear. I'm trying more and more to integrate these stories with the background world stuff, wherever logical
[Report This]Date: November 15 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 31: Queen-for-a-Day
It is great to see Maggie being Maggie again for a bit!
Author's Response:
I suspect this is the reaction of my readers but probably not anyone in the story besides Maggie
Date: November 15 2017 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 31: Queen-for-a-Day
I've been waiting a long time for this installment. Good work, my man. Also, I just started my first story, and if you could check it out that'd be awesome, because you're honestly one of my favorites on here! Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'll give it a look sometime.
Date: November 15 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 31: Queen-for-a-Day
I was starting to think you had forgotten about this story :D
About the second guest... Olivia is the obvious guess, so I'll go with [looks up her name[ Gabby.
Author's Response:
Not a bad guess, though it's my goal to write these such that people aren't required to remember every side character from past stories.
Date: November 15 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
I don't remember all characters but im glad Libby is a gentle one though 2nd guest...
Author's Response:
I can't be too mean to Scott for every single chapter
[Report This]Date: August 01 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 30: Punishment Period Increased
Olivia is a special kind of bitch, one that fits in well in your universe.
Author's Response:
Statistically speaking, since she exists at all in my stories, she was bound to be like that at least a little.
Date: August 01 2017 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 30: Punishment Period Increased
Maybe it's the temperature, but I'm having trouble linking the title of this chapter to what happens inside it...
On the other hand, toying with the idea of extending a tiny's punishment is something
I've loved since (iirc) LittleLee's pictures, but Maggie has a hard time limit.
Author's Response:
You're right to take the time limit into account. The chapter title is meant more as a callback to the idea that maybe Maggie is being even more indoctrinated into the mindset of this program than Scott thought.
Date: July 21 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Ok umm I think i need a picture for illustration to know what is this machine or what does it look like? otherwise it's good chapiter.
Author's Response: That's probably my fault for focusing so much on what Scott was feeling rather than what was actually happening. Maggie is using a horizontal leg press exercise machine, the kind you could find in most gyms or weight rooms.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
Another great chapter.
So Maggie has a never been shrunken? I thought a previous story had implied that she had, just not as often as Scott or even Kyle.
I also can't tell if Maggie is being harder on Kyle here or not. Though part of it is because Kyle keeps talking back, something Scott doesn't do or at least hasn't done in awhile.
Author's Response: There may have been hints that she almost was, but as far as this story is concerned, Maggie's never shrunk. So just cough if you happen across any plot holes. We'll see more later, but Maggie's still not quite sure how to feel about Kyle in his new position. Either way, she's much more conflicted than she is with Scott, who she's had plenty of years to adjust her attitude toward.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
Poor Kyle, he got mixed up in the wrong brats world.
Author's Response: He did indeed
[Report This]Date: July 20 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
"Life lessons"...right. This is all happening because why again? A phone call or a skype or something?..."Life lessons" I think it'll be fun and fair to literally start hating almost every woman in this story......5 stars!
Author's Response: Hehe. Part of the fun for me in writing this series is making characters it's easy to hate but also difficult to want them gone. Ideally, Scott is easy to feel for.
Date: July 17 2017 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Slightly of topic, but have you thought of using June Young in another story? I'm still curious to see what happened to her after the events of Toy teacher. Especially since Claire took her to the same place she took Carly in shrinking pains, but we never saw her.
Author's Response:
There's a very messy analytic web of previous story threads in my head which does indeed contain a followup to the ending of Toy Teacher, not necessarily a story about June, but definitely a better idea of what happened. I have no idea when/how that would appear, but know it does exist in the canon somewhere.
[Report This]Date: July 16 2017 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 20: Professional Guinea Pig
Amazing