Reviews For Reality Shift 1
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Reviewer: LilBob Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2021 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am glad to see another chapter. Keep going with the story, because it's really good. :)

As for who Marlin should interact with next, I'd like to see him with Spirit again. It's been a while, and she seemed like such a sweet girl. Maybe she'd treat him like a cute little brother at this point, despite his being much older. ;)

Reviewer: LilBob Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2020 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Glad to see you continuing this story. Going good! :)

Reviewer: Gtsgentle888 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2020 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

Really , good hope there's some foot content, continue faster

Reviewer: Gtsgentle888 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2020 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Brother , your story may be a jewel in this site, because it's somehow profound  and  could be philosophic. Continue like that . Peace



Author's Response:

I appreiate you for saying this! glad you like it!! If you have any suggestions for what you'd like t see happen next, please let me know

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2019 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 5

Please continue this story.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2019 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fixing it with Spririt (5'6")

Loving this story.

Reviewer: LilBob Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2019 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Liking this story so far! The slow pacing is good. Like how all the women's perceptions of him change as his reality slowly shifts. :)

Reviewer: Evildictator Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story and great update! Hope you keep it rolling!

This story does remind me of "Money and Power", which is awesome because that's one of my favorite stories.

I love the unaware aspect of the shrinking/reality shifting.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2018 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fixing it with Spririt (5'6")

Is this story continuing?

Reviewer: spgts Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Definitely a theme I enjoy seeing play out. Look forward to more.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fixing it with Spririt (5'6")

Will he start answering with Yes Ma'am? I hope so.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fixing it with Spririt (5'6")

Nice chapter. Enjoying this.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2017 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

Slow is great. It's good that he starts a new place in life though.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

A fine start in setting up the characters. Will he have a female boss at work?

Reviewer: aknouh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

This is great, the pace of shrinking is perfect, but i'm hopeing for more actions soon!

Reviewer: Fertility goddess loli lilith Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good slow shrinking start that eschews the need for an explanation and explores the characters relationship together and makes the husband unlikeable.



Author's Response:

I love actual feedback like this. Thank you! 

Reviewer: ThatOneDrumGuy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Have you heard of the giantess comic 'Money and Power?'  It has a very similar start to this, I believe you would enjoy it.  This is very well executed and I can't wait to see where this goes!

 

5 gold stars

DrumGuy



Author's Response:

I just checked it out! It was pretty awrsome! I wish I could do 3D like that. I think my story will be longer though, at least I hope. We'll see! Thanks! 

Reviewer: Peterdivine Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2016 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

God.

YES.

 

Please, please keep this going. This particular sub-genre is my lotus fruit.



Author's Response:

Mine too! And the lack of content out there motivated me to make my own. Thanks! 

Reviewer: Lil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice Start ! :) 
=D Continue ! :) <3 



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start. Hope she puts him underfoot!

Author's Response:

Eventually! 

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