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Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2017 3:01 PM Title: Interesting Developments

If she trusts him enough to use the Internet unsupervised, why doesn't she trust him enough to be full sized?



Author's Response:

It's not that she doesn't trust him, Eris told her that if she does make him full sized she'll take away her power.

If she could, Eri would have let Sirus go immediately but the longer she keeps him the harder it is to do it.

Reviewer: GFSM Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2017 1:00 PM Title: What Luck!?

I'm not usually into gentle scenarios but this is so well written. The characters are well rounded and believable.

Consider me hooked, thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Wow, thank you.  I feel really proud of my characters, thank you so much.

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2017 5:43 PM Title: Challenge Accepted!

I can't wait to see what Eri want to do.



Author's Response:

All I'll say is that it fits her character perfectly.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2017 2:27 PM Title: Challenge Accepted!

Please more.
very interesting story.

I'm sorry but my written English is poor



Author's Response:

Thank you for you interest.  More is on the way.

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 7:38 PM Title: Perspective

I think you have a great story here, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'll try to not keep you waiting

Reviewer: HuzToru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 12:26 PM Title: Perspective

I can't wait till I see more, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll try to have the next one up in a few days

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2017 11:02 AM Title: What Luck!?

I request more booty... always booty. Whether he wins or she wins ....to the booty! lol awesome story can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response:

Without spoiling anything I will just say I have some good news for you :)

Reviewer: pokechimp00 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2017 2:14 PM Title: What Luck!?

Really good story so far plz continue!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I plan to :)

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2017 9:08 AM Title: What Luck!?

So far this story is amazing... I was hesitant at first but now I'm staring to LOVE this story.. Especially the BUTT content!!! Please keep that up! Also keep the chapters detailed and LONG!! I now find myself waiting with anticipation for the next chapter!!! lol please do more. :)

Author's Response:

I am happy to hear I was able to catch your interest :)  I'm trying to include as many fetishes as I am comfortable writing and hope to continue to meet, if not exceed, your expectations!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2017 6:36 AM Title: What Luck!?

I like the story so far. The way you capture their thoughts certainly keeps me reading. My one criticism is your placement of chapter 3. I almost thought it was an error thinking "I already read this..." only to realize the shift in perspective. I would definitely switch 2 and 3 so that it is less jarring.

Author's Response:

I was thinking that too and the more I think about it the more I think I should... so I will :) thanks

Reviewer: BlueDream Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2017 5:45 AM Title: What Luck!?

This is wonderful. Sirius' crisis wisdom of "the life I knew is over, let's see how we can salvage this" instead of breaking down wonder if he had similar experiences in his former life or some other education that helped him adapt like this. And Eri is wonderful, it's refreshing to see a giantess who is kind of being nudged into it (by her alternate universe counterpart, no less).

Will follow this with great interest, thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the interest, I hope to not disappoint.

Reviewer: HuzToru Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 11:33 PM Title: What Luck!?

I really like the way in which the characters interact with each other, especially how Sirus just accepts his fate and tries to move on.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I wasn't sure if people would find Sirus' acceptance of his shrinking enjoyable.  I haven't had much time to work on the next chapter but hope to in after New Years.

Reviewer: seanpatty Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2016 9:31 PM Title: Figuring out Your Place

Well written story.. hope you continue.



Author's Response:

I'm glad it is easy to read and with few errors.  I have no proof reader and am forced to use Google Documents for spelling and gammar.

Reviewer: rhino2003 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 27 2016 12:03 PM Title: What Luck!?

Nice story can't wait to see what's in store. I like how taken back she is about his calm nature.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I was worried his demeanor would cause confusion as most in his position would be terrified.

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2016 11:54 AM Title: What Luck!?

Sounds interesting... I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Original...

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I hope to not disappoint.

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