Date: March 23 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
While waiting for the next YouTube chapter, I've been wanting to read more of your stuff, so I went and read all your stories but the French one. I have to say I really liked all of them. I tried reading the continuation that other guy did if Luna, but I couldn't make it more than halfway through the first chapter, the characters just didn't feel the same. But I liked the Fyth stories especially. It's a super interesting concept, a world where the giantesses are the subjugated ones. But other than that, I like your stories because they're all mostly gentle, worlds in which tinies are either respected or protected and treated with care. Can't wait for the next YouTube chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm taking a little break from YouTube. I'll get back to it, but I just need a bit of time.
I published a premium story on Deviant Art (spookytaco7.deviantart.com). Feel free to check that out if you want.
Also, if you want the non-French version of Splinter's Edge, you can get it here: tinyurl.com/npbfgzu
It's quite long so it will keep you reading while you wait for YouTube. ;)
[Report This]Date: November 10 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Pretty good overall but I can tell you REALLY wanted to squeeze this into 5 chapters. Peric's character suddenly felt alot different after chapter 3 out of left field. Onia didn't really have much of a character other that she's really dumb. The ending I will say was pretty well executed, i'll give you that! Anyway, as you can tell I did like Farmhand better but that's okay, this story was also really good!
One little universe inconsistency I found was that in this story Fyth blood is clearly green, but in the other while we don't get much blood we do get that scene where what his face hits Alani. There we get this line: "I nodded, glancing at the whip, its tip now tinged with red." So are there different types of Fyths or is this just a small error?
Anyway I hope you decide to revisit this universe, preferrably the Farmhand characters but that's just me! Thanks for writting this for us, good luck with whatever you have planned next!
Author's Response:
Excellent points, geeman! This is the first story I've ever attempted to fit in a length limit and you picked up on some of the negative consequences. I think characters undergoing change is a big part of any story, however I can see how Peric's felt a bit too fast.
Great catch on the color of Fyth blood. You really surprised me on that one. It could be explained by their diet (Alani eating Rouean vs Onia eating vegetation). Regardless, I'll need to think of some way to handle it when I write a third story in the universe.
I'm just amazed you remembered that. I should've re-read my original story before posting this one. I read the 'cliffs notes' version, but it wasn't sufficient.
Thanks for the honest feedback!
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Whoa, Spooky, ...that was incredible! I've never quite experienced anything like that! Vore usually repulses me, ...but, being a Fyth it seemed so much more acceptable. The thought of her previous owner perishing inside her stomach;after he found the skull, was a terrifying image to deal with, but, considering that he must have lost it, and went crazy in there, Peric seemed to deal with it in a more relaxed way, ...focusing on more positive images, and imagining things to pass the time away, ...I'm hoping that she eventually expelled him from her warm belly and the two of them are still carrying on together...
Onia do very GOOD! Fascinating Tale, Spooky! Loved It! ;`)
Author's Response:
Thanks, midnight! I'm usually not a fan of vore either. In researching this, I discovered a new word: endosomatophilia. Amazing how there's a name for every fetish.
As for the previous owner going crazy, it's hard to know. I left it somewhat open ended. Peric mentioned that had her stomach been smaller (had she not evolved) he likely would've been unable to survive in there for long. So maybe Tomas went crazy, or maybe he simply drowned or died through some other method.