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Reviewer: Gentle lover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2018 6:19 AM Title: Assault on Alcatraz

You have been out for 3 months I really miss your story

Reviewer: writer27 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 9:25 AM Title: Reunion

The youtuber part was really funny. I hate those bastards nagging about liking and subscribing. I simply refuse to because of it. I've seen a lot of those videos. I think most people would run from giant limbs lol



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! I was a tad reluctant to put that in, but I figured they needed a break from all the BS

Reviewer: iHategiants666 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2017 7:59 AM Title: Assault on Alcatraz

Not bad. Still, I wonder...

Your logic on Tracy's powers don't even begin to make sense. And why is it that her power is the most dangerous? Or doesn't have limits? I'm just wondering if that is your way of setting something up in the future...



Author's Response:

First off, apologies for taking 3 days to reply
I've been busy.

Second, in order to become larger something needs to absorb mass from somewhere. Now if Tracy did this by absorbing mass from the surrounding area she'd atomize everything around her and add said atoms to her form. This causes many problems like wide-spread destruction, small nuclear explosions, absorbing living things, etc. 
Now think of her body as a link between her world and another universe. She exists in her world but takes mass from the other universe, thus avoiding absorbing mass near her and also giving her a potentially Limitless supply of mass that she can add to herself. Easily able to go planitary size and beyond.

Hope that explains it better. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 8:46 AM Title: The Calm and The Storm

Your dialogue is really improving in this one. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: The Doctor Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2016 8:24 AM Title: Assault on Alcatraz

Great to see you here



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2016 8:21 AM Title: Assault on Alcatraz

Why hello there, its good to see you on GTS World!



Author's Response:

Yeah, a0040pc conviced me to put my story here

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