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Reviewer: Finishingk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2021 6:32 AM Title: Sacrifices.

This story is really good. I was hooked on to the story when i found it recently.

I hope you continue writing more stories and I hope your ok with the on going pandemic and all. I really want to know what will happen when Najia awakens after recovery.

I hope that you can continue the story. I would like to hear from you to see if your ok or if your planning not to continue.

Can't wait! :D

Reviewer: Lucia1312 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2020 5:28 PM Title: Sacrifices.

Hey, I was wondering if you were going to update again? It's been so long... 

Also, it's been a while since I commented on this story, so... Nice work as always! I'll keep waiting even if it takes years since I love this story ^^

Please don't take that long though, I'm dying to know what's going to happen next :,v

 

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2019 12:55 AM Title: Sacrifices.

Well, this one certainly took me a while to read, sorry ;_;

The current Ebon-Abby relationship is quite nice! The dragon won't be all friendly but is good enough for now. Also, it's cute she's trying to resist the flattering haha.

Now, as for the main part... Certainly, I didn't expect that kind of solution. It was a given that Casey and Eve had to be at peace for Abby's happiness but this was going beyond that. The pact made by Eve and Casey seems quite heavy, and I can't really say if this was the best outcome but... I guess it is? I'm quite satisfied with the result, the three of them are on their way to happiness now. Though, other than Abby saying yes I suppose there should be something more to be done before she's officially their mate?

Also, going by Eve's words I suppose Abby should still be able to give energy to the others hominals and bestials. And I'm quite curious about how much Casey's abilities have been affected by this.

Seems there should be some more stuff going on, looking forward to reading that!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it... I was having doubts.

I hope that it was a surprise at least, and a well recieved one. I had planned on this from the beginning, or at least at a certain chapter turning point early on. I have more to follow which is why I chose to do this, and I'm hoping it will show in the upcoming chapters. Whenever I get around to them.

Thank you for telling me what you thought. It means a lot to me, Kenta.

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