[Report This]Date: March 02 2019 1:00 AM Title: Black and White.
Hi! I think I got faster than usual this time... Hopefully...
Now to answer the pacifier thing: Is just a scenario that I've thought about before. Though, again, I was expecting a half-body-in thing so it wasn't exactly as I predicted.
About the chapter, it is nice to get to know more about Ebon and Ivy. For what I gather here, I suppose the dragons leave their eggs alone? And have them look for themselves right after hatching. Well, they got the power to survive that as Ebon showed there.
It's adorable that Ebon thinks of Ivy as her treasure! The way they lived together and their first encounter with humans was nicely written. Though the outcome is quite sad... Also, was neat how Ebon gradually learned the human language.
It's disheartening to read what they went through while being displayed and attraction for that circus, and even worse when the escape failed and Ebon got that wound... I hope that there's any way to get her better, even if unlikely...
The part of Ebon feeding Ivy was especially hard to read, both hurtful and sad... Well at the end Najia got there at the last minute before tragedy kept piling on, I'm curious at how she mentioned Ivy and Ebon are from different species. I suppose that's the reason why Ivy still isn't able to talk?
Looking forward to the next one, great job!
Author's Response:
Sorry for not getting back to you Kenta. I really feel bad about that. D:
I was caught up posting my new chapter quickly that i didn't check if I had any new reviews for the last one!
Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it. :D
With Ebon and Ivy's tale, Dragons are a bit fickle to write about so I took that approuch to make others wonder if thats how they're raised or if hunters just got to them first.
i'm glad you enjoyed Ebon's point of view through the years. I wanted to really explain herself since mostly shes been seen in a harsher light. And also to help express just where her hatred stems from and that its not without reason or mindless.
As for their species, it could be related to that. Or it could simply be that Ivy's still just a pup and hasn't matured yet. Its for me to know and maybe reveal. :)
Than you again for the review. I'll make sure to respond to it quicker next time!
[Report This]Date: February 22 2019 1:17 PM Title: Black and White.
Ive been pretty down the last few days but seeing this getting updated definitely brightens my day so thank you. And its finally nice to see we getting some more back story on Ebony and Ivory (always loved those names since devil may cry). Aldo what did abby mean when she says that she would like to be friends maybe more than friends? Is she trying to add more to her harem of monster girls? I wouldnt be against the idea but I dont think Casey or Eve would be all for that lol
Author's Response:
I'm very glad you liked it Foxinbox. I was worried it had been a bit to long. As for Ebon joining in Abby's *haram*, I wouldn't go that far, at least not in this Story. The meaning is more meant as Family, like she sees most of the other girls now.