Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2017 4:24 AM Title: The Morning After...

Oh, visiting family can take a real chunk of time. Having no writing time can be stressing but do please try to enjoy your vacations ^^

I wonder if Kari's reaction towards Abby's little adventure has a deeper meaning, like if she had some encounter with alcohol in her past in some way. In any case, is nice to see how much close they're now. Maybe their little chat has some influence in Abby's future choices?

The poison part was a bit sad but that just shows how much Abby's mentality has changed since the start of all this, and it was a kind gesture of Eve to take away the page, even if she had acted out of her own hatred and not really to protect her, not completely sure which for now. "Bathed in someone spit" is an interesting way to put it, I didn't really think about it before hehe.

I feel like there's some kind of clue in Brook's initial behaviour but I'm not totally catching it. Anyway is nice to see her again, her way of teasing Eve is really fun. Really builds up excitement for what might come next.

Somehow I felt Eve was cuter in this chapter, is really adorable how she made preparation to have a date with Abby!! The way she silenced the little teenager was also charming. By the way, I wonder if she makes the dresses herself or get some familiar to do it or something, Eve trying to sew a miniture dress seems like a cute picture.

Author's Response: Yeah... I dreaded going back to my family's but it can't be helped. We go every year for a few months... but it's alright. I get to see some friends I left so it's not all bad. I'm just sad I didn't get more time to write before I left because it's impossible to find time here. >,< More will get revealed in time with kari. She amongst most of the girls has one of the more deeper backstorys and there is a reason I haven't shown hers yet so don't worry, more will fall into place. I also wanted to dial it back a chapter. While fighting, drinking and other exotic pleasures may be relevent in my story don't forget, there still kids. XD Emotions and personalities will eventually pop up even if the maturer side takes presidency. Eve will also have more shown to her but this time, it won't be me narrating it. I hope you'll enjoy what's to come, but, it won't be from me next time around. I'll see you around kenta, hopefully I'll be back sooner then next year and not be away as long like last time.

Reviewer: Lucia1312 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2017 6:08 PM Title: The Morning After...

I love this story! It's amazing! Can't wait until next chapter ;)

Author's Response: Thanks Lucia1312, I'll try to be back as soon as I can!