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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

I look forward to seeing what tasks and torments Litea endures during this journey. I like the sense of danger and uncertainty about whether she'll be ransomed or disposed.

Still getting a kick out of your use of locations from my stories. The image of Gwynne going to Keelah and gorging herself on Fair Folk was very sexy. I think she'd find that most of them can defend themselves pretty well (not to mention the kingdom's own enchanted defenses against visitors). But the fact that she's considering it is pretty hot.



Author's Response: Lol, yeah, gwyne would be murdered immediately I imagine were she to visit Keelah. Remember that giant effigy the fae made in Matt and Amelia 2? Faeries are kinda scary once they get in groups. Now, were gwyne an earthborn sized gal... Gwyne is absolutely playing a mind game with litea here- we won't see the end of their telationship, but I honesty dot know if Gwyne would actually ransom her or just kill her. The length of this story, however, litea is sure to live. I've got a couple of ideas on how to 'torture' litea, and this may actually go longer than intended lol.

Reviewer: 3l33thax0r Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 7

Dammit, why did I have to check the most recent list before going to work? GAH!

The little bit (first 1/4) I read so far is great, cant wait till breaktime!



Author's Response: Hey man! Glad you're still enjoying this. Expect more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;$;&(8:&/$/82&(&/9;&;&&(4&:&/!:

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