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Reviewer: Koss Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2024 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

Any chances we see more chapters? This story is great!!!

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2020 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 7

This story has too much potential to stay unfinished. I hope there is some way you can get around to uodating this. Hope to hear from you.soon :)

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Date: March 11 2019 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2019 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 7

Yes! Yes! YESSS! Alongside Clare, Sarah is finally on her way to becoming the true goddess that she’s destined to be! I just hope Jason is aright after that collapse. And most importantly, I hope there are still MORE chapters of this beautifully written epic tale to come! :D

 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2019 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

Holy shit! This chapter was so fucking hot! Hopefully Sarah will have a special little guy pleasuring her downstairs too soon… ;)

 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2019 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

YES! Finally Sarah is starting to realize her true place as a goddess! ;)

 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2019 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love watching Clare slowly become more and more like a true goddess every chapter! 

 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2019 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loving this character development of Clare! I just hope Sarah joins her in her way of thinking… ;)

 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2019 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

"And so it begins..." ;)

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2019 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great introduction! Very well written! 

 

Reviewer: Braden697 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2018 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

When's Chapter 8?

Reviewer: BP75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2017 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

You need continue this man...

Reviewer: Squeesick Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 7

God I love this series, any news on chapter 8? It feels so good to see Sarah turn to the dark side. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: blobb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2017 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely cracking story, really great. Thanks for writing it! I can't wait to read the rest.

It would be amazingly cool if we get to see the real Sarah become like the dream one from the first chapter, outfit and all. from a personal perspectove that would make this story one of the very best I've ever read (its already close lol). ^^

Thanks for your hard work :)

 



Author's Response:

Dude, thank you so much for your kind words- it is so appreciated! More is to come, and while I looooooove me some hotter-than-Hades Greek Goddess giantess action, that probs will not be occuring in this tale. HOWEVER. Keep on the look out for the future, as there IS one I might want to do :) :) :)

Reviewer: Some_Dude Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2017 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is one of the best stories I've ever read, I hope you continue it!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Yes, I'm planning on it!!!!!!! :) Thanks so much for reading!!!!

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2017 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love the change that Sarah is going through. This is what Jason had been hoping for! Can't wait for next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hopefully it wont take as long. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2017 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh my Clare is a great character. Can't wait to see what else she has in store for everyone!



Author's Response:

she's pretty rude to people tbh. that whole eating and stepping on people thing.

Reviewer: Paris Green Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

I've been enjoying the story so far. You have a good grip on pacing which is good because having Sarah instantly going from sweet mother to ramaging villan would have resulted in a significant drop in quality (people don't exactly become murders the moment they're given the chance). I guess with Clare you give the idea that's she's rebellious to begin with, which I guess would explain why she's so willing to kill after becoming a giantess. I'm not quite certain that Sarah will be completely on board after chapter 5 but having her defend Jason was a good way to get it started. I expecting her idea of "acceptable" victims will become more and more generalized as the story goes on (or not, depending on how you spin it).

I've got a few things I'm hoping will happen (Sarah and/or Clare interacting with Jason's teenage peers comes to mind. Other than that I'm greatly anticipating what comes next.

You might what to comb back through a few of your chapters because I found a few errors (e.g. using "she" when Jason was talking).



Author's Response:

well, tbh, im just kind of going along at a pace that keeps in interestng. if i did a realistic pace on how someone would actually go from soft and cuddly to murdery murderface, it would take too long, imo. Thanks for the suggestion/review!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Clare is awesome, I second it! The way she played with the people at her feet, the way she embraces her godhood is so cool!



Author's Response: Clare is meant to the fire to Sarah's ice. I wanted to write her as your typical rampaging, crunch-n-munch, goddess in becoming gts that you often see in these kinds of stories. Contrast this with Sarah's reluctance. Thanks for commenting! :)

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Clare is SO hot! You did a good job portraying her dialogue as she kills the little people by her feet! =3 too bad she didn't get to enjoy her breakfast, though -_-

Author's Response: Well, let's just say that sometimes if you skip breakfast, lunch is a whole lot tastier. >D

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