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Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good to see you're still at it, don't worry about the number of reviews, they'll come along exponentially as you develop, for now you're on a good start.

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2016 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please don't stop writing, you have a pretty good thing going here

Reviewer: JIM58 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Neat

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2016 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Giantess culture and human culture will be good to see, great to read that you're going to devote time to that.



Author's Response: I have always tried to explore culture which is why I have my degree in sociology. I think I want to explore what happens when a culture has no trust.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'd continue it and perhaps have it turn into a love story. I could see Alexis getting to the men's camp but this time, she isn't rejected but they actually invite her. Alexis goes in but would eventually realise they see her as a weapon, someone who can beat down the women. She and Rektor would eventually get drawn further into the conflict and perhaps, they must find a way out when neither wants to be a part of the war any longer. 

Perhaps end it with the pair fleeing the war and living on their own happily or a twist where they discover there is a small village of men and women living together peacefully. 



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'm looking forward to flushing out how a relationship would work from a size point of view. Not to mention fighting cultural norms of their society.

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