Date: January 11 2019 11:56 AM Title: The Bathroom
Best stuff I've read in a while. Love it a ton!
Date: March 08 2017 9:39 AM Title: The Bathroom
yaaay! you did it! nice addition. You know what this story needs? more feet interaction. Great stuff, dude
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do ;)
Date: December 18 2016 10:59 AM Title: The Bathroom
good stuff mate. i was thinking, what about a flashback? it'd be nice to read what happened with the babysitter before she was eaten :)
Author's Response:
That's a good idea! I'll try to include that sometime in the near future
Date: December 14 2016 7:08 PM Title: The Bathroom
Continually superb. Loving the entrapment aspects and hope to see more. I'd be really happy to see some even more tiny captives, then have them trapped and imprisoned in various places - embedded under a toenail, stuck in the wrinkles of a navel, trapped between threads of a sports sock, jammed in ear wax or up a nose, ensnared in saliva in s bottle or held to the outside of a candy by dried saliva, even sandwiched in the creases of the girl's asshole or lodged under her clitoral hood or in her urethra, adhered to her discarded underwear by her fluids... the list goes on.
Author's Response:
Yeah, once Caitlin has disposed of the rest of the original 5 captives (aside from Julie, who she's probably gonna keep for the majority of the story tbh), she'll definitely go gather more and more in the future :)
And all of those are great ideas! I'll definitely try to work some of them in when I can!
[Report This]Date: December 14 2016 8:35 AM Title: The Bathroom
So glad to see you back. College can be real time consuming, huh?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately /: today is my last day of the semester tho so it's nice to know I'll have some free time to keep writing. I feel like I'm gonna hit writer's block soon but I'll keep trying to get chapters out consistently
Date: October 28 2016 7:18 PM Title: The Bathroom
Superb, just superb. The foot torture was amazing, and the toilet part was a new spin on the idea - very good. Loving the uncaring protagonist, it really adds to the story that she cares so little for them she forgets what they are or looks at her phone instead. Can't wait for more, especially more foot and butt stuff.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Many more chapters to come for sure. I want this to be a long story, with Caitlin kidnapping several women :)
[Report This]Date: October 27 2016 6:14 PM Title: The Bathroom
Really loving this story, can't wait to see the butt stuff especially but also just more chapters.
Great stuff!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: October 25 2016 12:22 PM Title: The Bathroom
I really love how vore was illustrated in this chapter. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Date: October 24 2016 4:18 PM Title: The Bathroom
This is a truly wonderful story, I think you should have her shrink some people younger than her though, could do a story line like they have annoyed her
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I plan for this to be a long story, and for Caitlin to kidnap several groups of people so there's definitely a possibility!
Date: October 24 2016 9:32 AM Title: The Bathroom
Nice work! I too just recently started writing and I gotta say its not as easy as it looks but that just my personal opinion. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! It's been a blast writing this so far. But yeah, it'll take me a couple of hours to write these chapters, and yet they're still shorter than I'd like them to be 😅
[Report This]Date: October 21 2016 4:30 PM Title: The Bathroom
Great stuff so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2016 12:15 PM Title: The Bathroom
Really good, especially for your first time. Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I've been an avid reader on this website for 4+ years and I've always wanted to write my own but never had the motivation or inspiration until now.
And yeah, I've definitely got more ideas for this story so I'll be writing again soon!
Date: October 21 2016 11:46 AM Title: The Bathroom
Great start!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!