[Report This]Date: November 28 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
And another terrific chapter! One has to feel sorry for Mavka, the way she struggles with her feelings. And now Edovan knows how she feels about him! How will he act with this knowledge and how will Yagaritte react when she finds out? How is the romance between Yagaritte an Edovan going to proceed with this development? You still made me very curious about what happened in the laundry room; what did Yagaritte whisper in his ear and who belongs the ring to that he found? Really can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Calahonda! always appreciate your feedback, and I know my partner does as well!
Edovan is a giver. It's just his nature. Question is..how MUCH is he willing to give? Or mebbe she just TAKES XD But either way it definitely complicates things! But Act 1 is about to end and Act 2 is about to start and it will definitely give Yagaritte a fighting chance as we get out into the wilderness and into some dungeons! <3 There will be lots of surprises along the way as the bigger story starts to take shape!
[Report This]Date: November 27 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! What a great chapter, the emotions Mavka feels really makes us empathize with her. I'm hoping she can have Edo. Maybe Mav and Yagaritte together can be Edo's lovers. As always can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! That really makes us happy, because we want you to care about the characters! and of course the biggest issue now is.. Edovan KNOWS. o.O Take heart tho Yagovan (Edoritte?) shippers. Yagaritte is going to be back soon in a big way!
Date: November 26 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like the love between the characters. Also how the way in which the gaintess appear to be a domineering presence that shouldn't be messed with. Overall, this is such a great read to pass the time.
Author's Response:
Glad to have you along! next update tomorrow!
Date: November 23 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Back in the laundry room , Yagaritte whispered something in Edovan's ear. Something that got him over the edge. Are we about to find out what or wasn't that relevant?
Author's Response:
you will find out..but its a secret for now <3
Date: November 22 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
My brother has a gnome in his garden (as quite some Dutch people have). Since your last chapter I feel very strange when I visit the place and can't help wondering what might have happened to the poor thing (the gnome, not my brother :-).
Author's Response:
lol.. i guess that depends..are there are any giant Dremora ladies hanging lurking about by any chance? xDD
[Report This]Date: November 21 2016 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love how Mav struggles to control her own primal urges. Physically, she's so much stronger than Edo, but mentally, he has her wrapped around his little finger and he doesn't realize it. Makes me wonder if she's getting the restraints for herself or him.
Author's Response:
Both! lol I love her mental struggle.. she wants to keep him..to eat him.. to study him.. shes so conflicted! Knowing Mav tho, she wants to figure out a way to eat her Edovan and have him too xDD If anybody can she can!
Date: November 21 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Terrific chapter and very well written indeed! Especially the way you describe the scenes from both perspectives. This story is getting better and better. Edovan is really on his way to become the Rudolph Valentino of The Horny Bear. I'm curious about Yagaritte's reaction when she comes to retrieve him. And where and how will she find him? Stashed in one of Mavka's devices? And how long will it take Yagaritte before she wants to try him out? Really can't wait for the next chapter !
Author's Response:
Thanks! He's definitely not out of the woods yet XD Hell, hes more less still on the moving belt, headed to the sawmill xD Let's hope Mav has more self-control now then she did the first three times xD Hopefully he's still around for Yagaritte to retrieve... O.O
[Report This]Date: November 18 2016 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
A female co-writer, that explains the depth in your female characters! And that I sympathize with Edovan because I still don't have a clue about them either!
There's no reason for the both of you to be nervous about your writing. As I mentioned before, your writing skills are above average. As far as I can judge as a non-native English reader, that is.
The comedy aspect of the story didn't escape my attention. Please do not worry about writing 'unbirthy type stuff', as you call it (hilarious phrase!). That gives the story the erotic touch it needs in my opinion. It is all a fantasy after all and that's what this site is all about. If I want reality, I switch to Discovery Channel. Or CNN....
Date: November 13 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great interaction between characters! I look foreward to seeing how this story plays out.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad to have you along!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2016 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the dynamic relationship between Yagaritte and Edo. Hopefully Mav won't eat him up. Your writing is a testament to what good penmanship can create. As always, it is always a joy to read your work.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm always a little torn on that front... but if she did it would be EPIC xDDD Hopefully he can escape to see another day, though or thats a much shorter story than we intended xDD
[Report This]Date: October 31 2016 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow what a great chapter! It will be interesting to see this dynamic evolve! Hopefully Yagaritte will be his first time.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Edovan definintely wants to hold out for her..but there are 32 other women at the Boar who may have other ideas xD Stay true Edo Stay true!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love, love , love this story! Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the kind words! We have the arc planned all the way to the end of the first book, though of course we haven't set in stone exactly how we are going to get there xD But there's so much written already that I still have left to post! But I'll be sure to pass the word to her that you are enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: October 20 2016 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I'm hooked. Some of the best writing on this site!
Author's Response:
Just glad you are enjoying it!