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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2017 3:19 PM Title: Unwinding at the End of the Day

First, I noticed the story title was changed slightly.

Second, I think I know all your giantess interests now. :) Maybe not, but at least I know which stuff you are familiar with. I have seen some stuff with candle wax and that stuff is brutal. I know of some people like it becuase they enjoy pleasure from pain. Anal bondage and a snake. That's some intense stuff right there. I guess I'm interested in pussy bondage.

I like how in one review you told me to be careful what I wish for, and now I see this Tom wish for things based on his fantasy. That was clever.

That's such a good point. If I woke up in some pantyhose, trapped with the stench of a woman, I might think of my fantasies too.

I'm surprised Tom got out of that thing. I thought he was tied up pretty good. Hmm. I guess someone is going to tie him up a little tighter next time. :)

Even though I have fantasies about being tiny and in mercy of a giantess, in reality it's probably scary becuase any moment you could die. I think I would pay some money for a virtual reality of some giantess world. Now that would be awesome.

I also watch giantess videos and unfortunately most of them consist of vore and I find it repetitive. On certain websites, I favorite giantess videos that only have a giantess dropping a tiny in their panties. There are a few, but not many out there. To be honest, I even check certain studios if they made any new videos consisting of panties.

There are a lot more stories on this site that use panties for some fun. Not as much as feet and vore, but enough to make me return to this site and read about more content.

Wow, Tom already fearful of his future. He said lots of bad things, but didn't much speculate on good things. There was a little bit about it being his fantasy and being passed by dozens of women, but then all this cruel stuff happened.

Maybe Tom can imagine Amy as a nice woman. A woman who will take care of him, bathe him, feed him, and she is hot too. She can take of him like a little baby and he can enjoy it while she calls him cute everyday. She gives him massages like you said, blowjobs every day and kisses every hour. I like the movie theater idea. Free ticket. Lol.

But then there is the sexy, naughty girl side. The version where she can be super horny all the time and desires release constantly. This Amy loves to use lipstick that can stick to Tom when she kisses him. The kiss print is like a mark of property. Sometimes it can be all over his body, or the classics 2 prints, on around his face, and another around his penis. Amy loves to wrap her lips and tongue around Tom's body, savoring his taste. Sometimes she dips him in chocolate syrup and sucks him like a lollipop until he is completely dry. Then she dips him back again and sucks on him. Amy would love to hold him in between her cleavage, and gently squeeze her boobs together, trapping him inside. She can put him in her bra cap and wear him like that. Tom's face pressed tightly against her nipple making her aroused for later. While I like the necklace idea that the lawyer women used, I also like a chain that is wrapped around her waist and a little thread is dangling from it, right in front of her pussy where Tom can be tied to as he dangles in front of it. When Amy walks, Tom gets bounced along her private area and gets teased about what will happen later that night.

Then, when Amy is horny enough, she can simply drop Tom in her panties, his body squirming around making her wet. Sometimes, Tom avoids her genitals and hides on the sides of her panties. Amy fixes that by wearing smaller, tight fitting panties that will prevent Tom from moving much when she places him on the center of her delicate underwear. Or, she can simply tie him up like we saw earlier. Of course, Tom is not a fan of being tied despite his fantasies so he tries to call out for her or for help and Amy decides Tom has to shut up so she places a thin layer of tape on his mouth so he can't speak. Tom is then forced to inhale her aroma through his nose all day, smelling her lovely fumed that fill his lungs all the time. Also, Amy sometimes wants to give little Tom a timeout, so she wraps him up like a mummy, leaving only his nostrils and eyes an opening and proceeds to insert him inside her feet first. She then inserts him up to his neck where her vaginal lips like to wrap and tighten around his little body. Only his head is visible and Amy teases him while he watches. Tom is facing up, so he sees her face looking down on him. Amy then decides to masturbate, her fingers just above his face. Tom could feel her body gripping onto him like a vice and he slides out when she is finished. With her opening now lubricated and wet, she slides the helpless Tom headfirst inside her and pushes him in until her hand is almost inside her. Her slick walls aid Tom's insertion as he goes inside further and further inside Amy. Amy arouses herself and orgasms spilling Tom back outside. Amy decides she wants Tom back inside, and wants him all the way inside to the point where he might never come back out. She takes Tom and places him on the tip of a 8 inch long dildo. She then impales herself with it and poor Tom is pushed all the way inside. Amy pulls the dildo out and smiles when she doesn't see Tom on the tip. Tom is safely stuck inside in her tight pussy, scrambling to find the exit. Amy's vaginal walls squeeze him relentlessly and they force him to stay inside her, trapping him. Amy enjoys the feeling. Tom's mummified body, struggling like a worm, and he cannot hurt her, no scratching or biting, not like it would hurt her anyway. Amy puts on her tight lace panties and blocks off the exit for good. Then she puts on pantyhose, tightening that exit and preventing any escape. Then she puts on tight yoga pants which hug her body and reveal her beatiful body. Amy wants this to last forever. Tom is in timeout and there is no escape.

Ok. Now my fantasies are controlling me.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Whew, man ...I must've struck a nerve! Ha, yes! ;`)

  If a person woke up bound tightly inside of a huge roll of coiled up pantie hose, their first thought might not be a pleasant one.  Tom's mind was recoiling, he was lacking oxygen and his brain went into overdrive, ...searching for answers he instantly started thinking of all the bad things that could possibly happen to him, ...not really knowing anything about this woman, just that she was Maxine's recptionist and that she is very beautiful - but, being as vulnerable as he is at this new shunken size - he instantly became so frightened that he started imagining everthing that could go wrong!

  Just between me and you though, Amy's a real sweety, but she does have a naughty side, where she likes to tease you and keep you consatntly wondering what's going to happen next...

 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2017 2:56 AM Title: 'Toys' ~ Part 2

Very much enjoying the story. Angela has been so close to seeing something amazing, a few times now.
Love when Giantesses talk about little people oblivious to the little person's feelings.The two lady lawyers are interesting in their conflict on how to treat little people. But they agree on obedience.
Still loved the Mother. I assume no pool for the kids. There little man ends up in the garbage. I would love to see that Mom get her own little man.
I can hardly wait for Ms. Coopers meeting with Dr. Harrison.
I greatly look forward to your updates on your story.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thank's Diesel!  Coming right up! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, for some reason I thought that was a real person becuase of how carefully one girl was playing with him and how cruel the other one was.

Oh yeah, it was Amy. That's why she wanted to go ask Maxine for a tiny again. In that case, how did Angela come up with tiny humans as her first suggestion?

What?!! I'm way off my prediction? I thought it was kinda clear with Angela's appointment coming up and then Tom is still in Maxine's purse and after that's settled down, Maxine goes back home and we learn about Billy, no? Hmm. I guess there are more surprises coming up. (Hopefully, ones I would like.)

What do you mean that Tom going to Amy won't work out? It's perfect! Lol, you described it beautifully a few chapters ago. Tom was checking her out in the office, Amy saw tiny Tom and wanted him too, Amy wanted to punish him, and Tom deserved it since he was going to jail.

You have no idea how much I want Amy to have Tom. (Ok, you probably do.) Its just the way she was dominating Billy was arguably the best stuff I read on this site and the mere thought of Tom being kept by this lovely, sexy, naughty woman is the dream and ever since that chapter where Maxine told Tom his future, I was already making fantasies of both of them together forever. I mean, a story of Amy with her little Tom could have some potential.

You bolded the word "think". I'm trying to think of ways that Tom could think of being given to Amy but actually given to someone else. Is Tom going to a Victoria Secret store and being sewn to a tiny pink lace pair of panties that Amy will one day buy? Will Tom be given to some random woman who puts him inside a dildo and gives to to Amy? I don't why I'm ending this all with Amy, I just hope that by what you are saying that if Tom doesn't go to Amy directly, then perhaps another woman will give Tom to Amy later.

Usually I'm pretty good with patience, but this story is so darn great that I keep checking for updates/responses and it's driving me crazy! I love it!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  Yeah, you'll just have to wait and see...  lotta idea's Tom! Be careful what you wish for, if Amy actually gets her hands on Tom, she's going to do things that would make a New York Hooker blush!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2017 5:50 PM Title: 'Toys' ~ Part 2

Doesn't Angela have a smartphone to look at when she is bored? Lol. Rarely do people these days just look around becuase they are distracted by their phones.

Wow! So that little man was thrown in the trash. Probably died in there too. I guess the mother thought it wasn't a real person.

Just becuase a woman says "aw, he's so tiny and helpless" etc, that doesn't have to mean a small human. It could be like a little pet. (That cat). Maybe is was a baby squirrell, rat, or soemthing. Even a cute lady bug could have been a good guess. I wonder how Angela came up with tiny humans after eavesdropping.

Ok, I forgot that Angela saw the 2 tiny guys captured by the business women. Forget my last paragraph. Lol.

Hmm. I think I can see the next few chapters. Angela visits Maxine next, then Maxine delivers Tom to Amy and then Maxine goes back home to check on Billy.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  Um, the (toy)doll, was just a plastic doll.  It was inside the 'slappy meal' at ther restaurant, ...and, Amy was the one who met with the Lawyers in the lunch room, but she didn't see them capture the men, she just got a sneek-peek at one of them hanging around Twinkie's neck, ...and finally, you're almost close enough to figure out that we'll be seeing Maxine in the next chapter, but your way off on the rest Dude! Lol!!!  

 Ha ha, Tom thinks that he's going to be given to Amy, ...but, I'm not so sure that'll work out somehow..  ;`)  just yet, anyway! ;)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 1:56 PM Title: 'Toys'

Will the Mother and her tan pumps step on something else? Maybe a random insect.
Hoping,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Ha, ha aaaaah, Ha - Well, ...I don't know!   But, I DO KNOW, that she IS, gonna put her foot down, and very firmly too! Lol! But, not in the way that you're thinking... heh heh he...h.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 3:31 AM Title: 'Toys'

You describe Maxine and her surroundings very well. It's easy to picture it. The two girls playing with their little man was great. Loved the Mother saying that she would take him away. Love, love, love her tan colored suede leather pumps. I hope she steps on the cat. Love her shoes.
I can hardly wait to see where you go with this and what is Dr. Harrison up to?
Her taping on the purse and saying hope your comfortable tiny one was also great. As if his comfort was a real concern of hers.
Great chapter, very descriptive and full of little things. Please let the Mother step on the cat.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

  Thank's D!   I was hoping that image would come to mind! (Ha!) But, no, I don't think that she will actually step on the Cat, he's a very agile little feline.  And, I don't think he's going to get squashed that easily! Lol! The Cat has a special part in the story, that's yet to be revealed, so...

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2017 11:52 PM Title: 'Toys'

What a clever chapter title. I like it. Each word representing soemthing important in this chapter.

I love the little intro with Maxine. Now I know what happened to Tom and I like it. She literally traps him in her sweaty used pantyhose and then stuffs that in her purse pocket. Now that's a sexy trap. Imagine him waking up. Tom better get used to that smell.

That first part with Angela "unsnapping" her jeans sounded hot. For a second, I thought she had a tiny with her. Also the phrase "waistband of her skin-tight blue jeans, ...snuggly hugging her wide, shapely hips." is super sexy. Just thinking about dropping a man into the "waistband of her skin-tight blue jeans, ...snuggly hugging her wide, shapely hips." Would be perfect.

Wait, so these girls got a toy man? A real one? If yes, I hope the mom eventually takes him. Little girls will use the man in inefficient ways. I bet the mother has more practical uses for this little man.

This cat is getting a lot more attention that I thought. Does this cat represent soemthing? I know this cat will somehow impact the story, but I don't know how. Also, poor cat. Getting shrunk like that feels cruel. But for a random guy, I totally approve the shrinking.

Why did that girl step on the cheeseburger if she wanted her sister to see bug on it? By stepping on it, the bug is gone and her sister won't freak out....so she ruined the prank she was planning?? This girl makes no sense.

Also, who's mother makes their girl eat a flattened sandwich that was on the floor? Usually it's the other way around. The kid wants to eat the burger but the mother says it's filled with germs and such. What a bad mother, now I don't think she should get the tiny man. In addition, if the food was stepped on, you could get another one served for free, or at least a discount. This is ridiculous. It's just a burger, the girls shouldn't eat them anyway and the mom should be glad her girl doesn't want to eat it.

Lol. Angela decides to leave when the mom forces her daughter to eat the sandwich. If that was me, I would have watched the whole thing and write an article of horrible parenting and why most family arguments are silly.

Ok, that burger scene really got to me and I know it was just some background context.

Well, I hope this Angela is important. I know she is important, but we still don't even know much about her and what is going to happen to her. Hopefully, we learn Angela's importance next chapter. Lots of speculation about Angela at the moment.

Speaking of tinies and how Angela feels horny all the time, I can't wait for the adventure of Thomas Speedman to continue! (I love saying his name!)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

This was more of a 'size fetish' thing, comparisons...  from Angela's perspective.  The Cat does however, represent something, you have a keen sense of persection Tom.  The next chapter will reveal a little bit more.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 12:34 PM Title: Ch. 44 - "Powerful Lady Lawyers"

I would love a few chapters on the janitors points of view. Obviously as they are suddenly small they eventually search for food. Do the ladies see them first? Do the janitors try to get their attention?
Maybe they almost get stepped on by accident by one of the lady lawyers. Do they run in fear from the 2 lawyers? I assume the ladies are amazed when they see them.
Look, little people, tiny men. Let's catch them. The 2 janitors are so terrrified of the Giantesses and their heels.
Hope you like this,
Diesel

Author's Response:

  With just the mention of them, 'Powerful Lady Lawyers' - it does add to the suspense, but I think that the mystery of what 'actually' happened, to those poor little men, adds more to the story if we just leave it at that, ...wondering and imagining what will eventually become of them - the imagination is a very powerful thing ~ why not use it, and just allow that part of the story to linger in the readers mind...

  I did workout several scenarios for them, but I just set it aside for future use - maybe, we'll see them again before the ending comes.

 Thank's Diesel!  Nice suggestions!  ;`)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 12:23 PM Title: Ch. 45 'Prisoners'

Love Dr. Harrison shrinking a few more. I want to see the fear the other little ones have when they first see her.
Love her heels and hose. Black pumps are dominating and sexy.
Will she have a conversation withAmy or maybe the 2 lawyer ladies about shrinking masses of people?
The most thrilling stuff is hearing Dr.Harrison talk about the possibilities.
Great chapter,
Diesel

Author's Response:

A few chapters with Maxine and the Lady lawyers is a ways down the road, yet, but they'll be back in the story again

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 12:04 PM Title: Ch. 44 - "Powerful Lady Lawyers"

So the lawyer ladies have the little janitors. Interesting. Will Amy get ahold of them?
I thought that maybe Amy would be at work and just as she stands as getting ready to leave, she would see a tiny figure waving his hands and screaming for help.
Maybe that will happen or maybe Maxine will give her one of hers.
Love this story,
Diesel

Author's Response:

  I was wondering about that, too.  It would be an awesome extension to add to the story...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 4:49 PM Title: Ch. 45 'Prisoners'

I think my brain just fainted. (Is that a thing?) I just kept reading one thing after another, tears of joy sliding down my face as I began to understand this chapter. I love it!

Maxine has 7 tinies now. Interesting. She really means business now. She sent Billy home, about to send Tom away and is devoloping plans for the others guys soon.

Billy with Maxine's daughter. As a father figure? Lol. I kinda laughed at that part. Also, the part where her daughter was going to find other uses for Billy was jus of sexy becuase it left me to imagine those possibilities.

But I don't want to imagine this other duo with Amy and Tom. I want to see, read and picture each thing going on from detail to detail. I'm so happy right now!

Did Amy see Tom after he shrunk? Or was she referring to when she saw him in the lobby? Another thing I like is how Tom is attracted to Amy, but also scared by being tiny. What a beautiful combination. Now Amy just has to be a naughty girl like she was with Billy.

Just to clarify, is Maxine going to Amy's place while Tom is in her butt part of her crotch, or is he wrapped up in her dirty pantyhose on the way there?

Hmm. Tommy sounds a bit weird to me. I hope Amy uses just Tom. Or peeping Tom. :)

I also love the name Thomas Speedman. So many jokes can be made. Imagine Tom running and Amy giggles thinking Tom should be slowman instead. Tom tries to escape, but Amy keeps catching him.

Yes, I love the direction of the story. I like what Maxine did with the tinies she had and I can't wait to see the reaction of these tinies with their new owners.

I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Ha, ha, Now That's the kind of review that I like to get! ;`)

  I usually have to re-write a chapter about three times, and sometimes 5 times, but this chapter only had to be tweaked a little bit and I felt pretty good about it.  The Narative in the beginning was a little longer that what I wanted but, it was the only way that I could allow for the experience to play out the way that I wanted it to.

  That said, Maxine will eventually place Tom into her purse (wrapped up in the nylons) and that was revealed at the very beginning - so, I didn't have to carry it out at the end, because you already knew what was about to happen...

  One thing though, I don't want to spoil anything but, - 'Don't forget about 'Angela Cooper' - remember her? She is going to stop by Maxine's office before she leaves for Amy's place, so....  I don't know, about that yet..  ;`)

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Glad to help.

Well, I wanted Maxine and Billy to bond becuase I was thinking that Billy now trusts Maxine much more than Amy. Amy's torture should make Billy more obedient. Also, Billy believes that Maxine is the one who can make him grow so he wants to stick with her.

For another bond, I would love to see Tom be with Amy. Maxine needs to hide him so he can't go to jail. Maxine decides that Amy could have him since Amy knows how to hide her little man very well. In addition, I'm sure Amy would love to have a tiny really soon after she gave Billy back. Maxine might also be worried that Amy would take all her shrunken guys, so she gives Tom for the time being.

Maxine is trying to help find a solution for Billy, but for Tom, Maxine just promised a way out of going to jail. Since Mr. Speedman is a bad boy anyway, don't you think that he should be punished by someone as naughty as Amy?

Hopefully, you like this second bonding idea too. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

As for a background or a broader picture, you could include a small segment about Maxine realizing that these chemicals may have affected more than just Billy. She can then go over causes in her head and test the chemicals herself to confirm it.

Or Maxine just connects the chemicals she uses on Tom and the cat to the chemicals that the janitors used.

For a bigger picture, I think Maxine will try experimenting with Billy, trying to find a way to perhaps normalize him? Amy could still be that fun character that has her way with a tiny while she helps Maxine find a cure. Maybe Amy is also trying to stall Maxine so she gets more time to have fun.

The main focus I believe is on Billy, so Maxine can work with him to find a solution. As they work together, they form a special relationship.

Then Amy shows up here and there, and in my opinion, is the star of this show. She can offer Maxine tips on having fun and relieving stress that they both may endure. Maxine appreciates Amy's help and decides to let Amy keep a tiny while they both continue to find a solution.

Maxine is driven by the thought of making a ground breaking discovery. Of course, she doesn't want to go public until she knows how to reenlarge someone first. Amy on the other hand is taking advantage of having a tiny for her own desires and tries to convince Maxine that instead of working on enlarging them, they should find ways of making the tiny guys more durable and pleasureable and make money of that idea.

Just a few ideas I thought of. I'm trying to fit in the fun with also the main story behind the shrinking.

Author's Response:

Yes, that's pretty much the jist of it.  Only, I was going to have Maxine working on a way to shrink more and more people (instead of attempting to actually help Billy) But, since you mention it, it would make more sense that she would decieve him into believing that she was actually trying to help him, and trying to return him to normal, - And, all the while, she's shrinking more victims with the chemicals.  

Amy simply loves the idea, and is willing to help her shrink everyone down - she wants to be a giantess!  The idea of Billy and Maxine forming a bond is great!  I like that... concider that done!  Thanks Tom!  You just gave me some extra ideas that really helped! I feel Re-energized now! ;`)

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

In my opinion, I would say it might be best to move on. We saw how Billy shrunk and these janitors probably shrank similarly.

For me, I'm interested for what comes next for tiny Billy and tiny Tom. Also, I am curious if Amy finds a new pet. :)

Also, I think you can connect the dots for what I want. (Amy finding Tom). What Amy has brought to this story makes each chapter irresistible and I would love to experience that again.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I know what you'd like to see, ...heh, ;`)  but, in order to create some type of build up, there needs to be something more - a broader picture - right now, there are several things all going on at the same time, and picking which direction to go, (so that I don't have to backup and branch off into another side-story.)  you know what I mean, it's a puzzle! Lol!

  ....But, that's what I love about this.  Putting it all together at the very end is the hard part, though, so I have to keep in mind where the overall story is headed. I need to change the summary, now too. - Make it more effective, any suggestions on that - btw - the title is about to come into play and the meaning will all be revealed...

  I get so absorbed in this sometimes that I've written several chapters and suddenly changed something and then had to go back and re-write the entire thing... not completely but, after editing the flat draft was a lot shorter! Ha!

 Thank's again Tom, I really appreciate your input! ;)

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2017 3:41 PM Title: Ch. 44 - "Powerful Lady Lawyers"

Interesting. The floors were recently swept and these women already have the janitors in their grasp.

Somehow it's some chemicals that janitors use and Maxine also has a batch of them as well. She used it on the cat and also on Tom.

So far, Billy, Tom, and these 2 janitors are who we know got shrunk. We can't guarantee that it's only them anymore. There could be more tiny guys running around now that we don't know.

I loved the use of the necklace and how it was a container for these little men. Also, these women hide them in their cleavage. Perfect.

To make it perfect, just have the guy out of the test tube and hung by his tied wrists and his mouth shut so he can't shout for help. That way, the women will enjoy the feeling of the a tiny guy struggling within their cleavage.

Amy is curious and now I wonder what she finds when she confronts Maxine. I love Amy's ambition to find another tiny man again. It's making me excited.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank's Tom. I needed to get this part of the story behind us, so that the shrinking would be more understandable. Because it would only make sense that if the fumes shrank Billy, then obviously, whomever was using the stuff would have ultimately been in contact with it as well...  Now then, I'm trying to decide weither or not to back up and do the Janitors back story.  Or, just move on and continue with what I've already have planned out ~ roughly ~ that is...

  Do you think it would slow the overall story down too much to do the Janitors POV and write several chapters to detail what actually happened to them?  I'm leaning toward just leaving it to the readers imagination and continuing on - what do you think?

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2017 2:00 PM Title: 'Tom' - continued

Giving Amy pleasure is harder than I thought. She is voracious.
Fascinating. 2 little ones in cages. Dr. Maxine is in control. This should be great. Love when she talks scientific about reducing people. I can hardly wait to see where you go with this and who is involved.

Author's Response:

Yeah, there will be a few more people involved, and more and more things happening...

 Lol, I can't say anything more! (Ha!)  Thank's D!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh no. Not Diane and Joyce. After having all these steamy chapters with Amy, I don't want to go back to those two characters. Maybe it's just me, but wow, Amy is so amazing that I want to be with her forever.

Tiny Bill and Tiny Tom. I wonder who gets who and what happens next. I'm so excited!

Author's Response:

Maybe, you should read the story summary again... there will be something happen between Ms. Cooper and Thomas Speedman, that will shine a light on the very dark and violent - revenge - from the standpoint of the abused getting her chance to regain a bit of empowerment.  Tom, on the other hand, will suffer for his past deeds at the hands of a very inventive giantess.  It'll be short and sweet, though, not a long part in the story.  I wanted to use it as a brief depiction of what the possibilities could be from a much different perspective.

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Date: April 30 2017 3:04 PM Title: 'Tom' - continued

This was probably one of the best chapters in this story. I loved how you focused on Billy and then shifted the focus to Tom at the end. It felt like some sort of foreshadowing.

Billy was tied up at first, and at the end of the chapter, Tom was taped up. Like Billy said, this might be a new personality of Mrs. Maxine that we haven't seen. I don't recall Maxine taping Billy down before so this might be exciting.

The verbal exchange with Amy was fantastic! The part where she opened her panties to look at him and taunt him was the best part of the chapter! When Billy said "Noooo!" I was cheering "Yessss!"

The one thing missing was a sexy catch phrase that Amy could have said before sealing him back in her panties. "I'm keeping you in my panties all day". "My pussy wants to marry you" "There is no escape for you little man" "I know deep down you truly enjoy this" "I want to fuck your little face tonight" "I can't resist Billy, this is my fantasy" "mmmhmm, you're better than my sex toys." "Most men dream about this." "I love a struggler" "I think I'm going to keep you as my sex toy forever, Billy".

So many great things this chapter. Another example is when Billy has that long reflection period where he thinks of himself as becoming Amy's sex slave. It made me jealous of Billy. I would love to take that destiny.

In addition, I like when you described Amy when she just had her orgasm and Billy describes what he sees. The part when Amy is gasping, her breasts heaving, mouth is oval shaped, awesome! I can easily picture that scene and it feels so real.

That outfit Amy wore reminds me of a sexy school girl outfit that you see teens wear on Halloween. Nice touch with the leggings to keep Billy pressed against her.

Hmm. I'm curious how Billy ended up back in Maxine's hands. Did Amy finally give him up? I guess Maxine had some sort of leverage. Maybe Maxine promised a replacement that Amy could keep forever. :D

Honestly when Billy woke up in the cage and Maxine said Mr. Speedman, I had this incredible thought. What if Maxine somehow switched the minds of Tom and Billy? I thought Billy woke up in Tom's body in the cage and soon Tom would wake up in Billy's body trapped with Amy. That would be a random, but cool plot twist.

Lol! Billy feels sorry for Tom?? After what Billy just endured? Billy arguably went through hell to him, but somehow he thinks Tom is going to suffer a worse fate. Wouldn't Billy think that whatever Tom gets would be less of a punishment than what Billy got?

Tom is unconcscious. I hope that whatever sexy thing that Maxine does with him, Tom will be awake and completely aware of what is going on.

Now that Amy doesn't have Billy, maybe she can get Tom. (I'm crossing my fingers.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you thought it felt real. I reworked two sections of this chapter several times, and I still didn't feel completely satisfied with it. Although, after I decided to change the direction and bring Tom directly into the story, I had to rethink a few things.  I wanted to get Billy out, and at the same time bring Tom in, hopefully, it will all fall into place during the next chapter...   Diana returns.  And, Joyce is really getting friendly with her and her mother, the three of them will be together after Maxine realizes that Joyce knows...

Thanks, Tom!

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2017 11:20 AM Title: 'Tom' - continued

Awesome ending as always. Please don't ever end this story



Author's Response:

Thank's man!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2017 8:23 PM Title: Ch. 42 'Tom'

Love Kristen Bell. Tom is going down. I am so enjoying this story. Hope Tom gets a closer look at her ankle bracelet. He obviously will have to look up to see it.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thank's Diesel, Ha ha yeah.  I think you might be right!  Kristen B. is Gorgeous, can you imagine 'her' as a giant... ;`) 

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