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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2017 11:07 AM Title: Melancholy Daze - pt 3

There are so many nice scenes in this chapter :-)

The way she grabbed him from her purse - the thumb from the top to his chest and the ring finger from behind between his legs. Sitting like that naked on her finger = pure helplessness :-)

And then how he repeatedly hugged her middle finger :-) I just liked those finger scenes very much.

I am not extraordinary into large breasts fetish but I love her large areola (dark in my imagination) and firm aroused nipples - being shrunk and seeing this from below would make me feel weak.
Her full wide-set hips swaying from side to side, heavy thighs and butt with few extra pounds make Angela a gorgeous woman in my eyes :-).
And then her thick growth of curly hairs beneath her panties are so arousing. I just cannot wait until Denny is confronted with this beauty. With her smell after the whole day, with her soiled panties. My imagination just runs.

I also love the last scene how Angela tells him he is going to be her licktoy :-) and that he must earn his keep. That was wonderful.

I am really curious what Angela has in store for little Denny.
Maybe she could use her Hitachi magic wand vibrator too ;-). While little Denny would lick her clit she could intensify her pleasure by pushing the vibrating device from behind his little head.

The little tease with the bib reminds a blog-article of a dominant lady where she described how her sub is required to wear the bib when he eats her :-)

Author's Response:

    Haha, yeah, ...that Bib thing was just an impulse item, I thought that I edited that out, ... oh well, WTF! ;`)

  Next chapter, is already up, ...So,   C'mon man, you gotta keep up!  ;)

 Thank's LT!  

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2017 4:01 AM Title: Melancholy Daze - pt 3

What a chapter. From his ride in a purse to her picking him up. The perspective from his point of view is great. The fear of grabbing on to just her finger for support. Fantastic. Who knew the dew would be so hard to drink. Love his covering his private parts. Embarrassed in front of a Goddess. Little people and boys do that.
Describing a lot of it by his viewpoint is fun. Angela is going to also be fun.

Author's Response:

Thank's Dee!  We're slowly working toward Jeffery's part, so just keep it cool, ...I'm getting there. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2017 3:26 PM Title: Melancholy Daze - pt 3

Wait a minute? You mean there is a 4th part to this? Wow! I thought it would only be like 2 parts and then the story continues from Maxine.

Dennis has mixed feelings right now. Despite all the fear we see in him, he might actually enjoy being toyed by Angela. Of course, her being drunk doesn't help.

I love the descriptions that you give her as she walks and how her clothing stands out.

I'm still not sure what happened with the soda, but I guess it doesn't matter.

This is felt like a long chapter and I enjoy it. I also like frequent updates. Any idea when you might post it?

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank's Tom, the soda was a thing that I saw on 'Honey, I Shrunk the Kids!' the surface tension on the top level of any liquid would almost certainly be a lot stiffer if you were a lot smaller.  Like dropping a small grain or a Pepper Seed in a glass of water - it floats on the surface tension and doesn't get a bit wet. ...most of the time! 

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