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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2017 9:01 AM Title: 51 'Mr. Yum Yum'

I love domestic femdom scenes very much. So I liked how Angela was thinking about using the little man. And how she felt empowered and aroused.


But the most erotic scene was when Angela got amused seeing Tom wiping his hands into her pants. You wrote:

"Tilting her head to the side, trying to contain her laughter. Just a slight jiggle slipped out as she covered her mouth, her belly shook and her breasts bounced as she attempted to control herself from bursting into a fit of girlish giggling..."

That was just perfect. Very nice psychological moment showing Angela is sincerely amused by the effect of her dominant behavior - which is so erotic!

I liked activities Angela was thinking about for her little man. Just for further inspiration here are some others I can imagine:

• collecting crumbs from the carpet

• collecting crumbs from Angela's clothes while she is eating and relaxing in front of TV. (He is not allowed to eat them (that would be stealing) but only putting them back into her plate).

• collecting toe nails after pedicure

• cleaning Angela's toothbrush

• removing hairs from Angela's hairbrush

• cleaning the toilet brush

• shampooing Angela's curly pubic hairs (I would love if she is not shaved.)

 

... rewards when he is a good boy:

• Angela rubs nutella chocolate on her anus and he licks it clean.

• Angela sits him straddling on her leg and let him hump her pantyhose thigh. She may let him hump also her ankle or crotch. He is never allowed to cum without her permission. 

• He may sniff her anus, crotch, feet, soiled pantyhose, ...

• Angela gives him these rewards in front of her friend (e.g. that one she watches the porn with)

 

... punishments for infractions:

• taking away the privilege to use hands or to speak

• corner time

• caning with a ruler

• flogging with stinging nettles

• taping him to the inner side of the toilet lid and then ignoring when she uses the toilet

• wrapping him in a lace except the head (like a mummy) and securely hanging him into the front part of the toilet bowl so that he is in the water up to shoulders. Then she uses the toilet as if he is not there. 

Angela would use punishments to reaffirm her authority. So after each punishment they do a small ritual which gives him a way to affirm his submissive role. E.g. she stays above him hands on her hips. He drops on hes knees and kisses her feet. She then squats and allow him to kiss her anus. If she feels horny after punishing him she then takes him and uses him as her living dildo.

His name could be e.g. Deny (like orgasm denial which is my favorite fetish too) :-)

 



Author's Response:

   Ew yeah, I really like the idea of   "shampoo-ing"  of her curly-bush, or even just sitting there in it, while she watches u-tube vid's, or casually sits at her vanity brushing her hair...  ;`)

 The Nutella on the rim sound pretty kinky!  Lol!  Maybe some whip-cream, too! (From the squirt can) Oh, Yeah, humping that panty-hosed ankle, as she casually sits crossed leggged - bouncing her foot, flipping her toe!

  *The puishments i.e. 'Stinging Nettles'  "Yowch!"  I once grabbed a handfull of those when I was pulling weeds! Son-of-a-Bitch! Them are some wicked weeds!  My hands were raw for the rest of the day! 

  ...I like Deny.  Denial and tease, slow torture and humiliation.  Foot and Ass worship, ...severe punishment in order to mentally control him - almost to the point of mentally breaking him - almost !!!  Got It!

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 11:59 PM Title: 51 'Mr. Yum Yum'

Yes! I love this transition!

After all these chapters of flirting with the idea of Angela with Tom, we finally get the news that Amy's sex session with Tom is more important.

Wow, seems like everyone likes Tom. Cheeky little bastard, isn't he. Even Angela couldn't resist him. Well, Amy claimed him first so I'm excited for that.

When I read that Amy sent an email that said urgent, I was thinking it was just about her desire for Tom. I still love her anticipation for him.

I think my fan fiction chapter that I made recently would fit in nicely into the next chapter. I know you have a plan all ready for it, but maybe my ideas from it can inspire you once again. :)

Interesting to listen how Maxine doesn't care much for the tiny guys she shrank and always thinks that they are the same. Also, she considers them very insignificant which makes her unaware of how each one is unique. I'm glad Amy's email reminded Maxine how special each tiny is.

I love the seductive, yet sinister Maxine at the end of the chapter. Gave me a little reminder that she was the first badass giantess that I fell in love with before the lovely Amy took over.

Speaking of Amy, we know she changed her bedroom into a sex dungeon and has a full inventory of ideas to play with Tom.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  Well, okay, Tom.  You got your wish, but when Amy gets ahold of you, ...you'll probably wish that Maxine had never received that e-mail from her!  She really had to restrain herself with Billy, because - well, she felt so sorry for him under the circumstances, and all, ...but with Mr. Speedman, that's a different story!  I think the chapter title will be something over-the-top, -  'Cringeworthy'   Should be up by Friday or Saturday.  Thank's Man!  ;`)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 10:42 PM Title: 51 'Mr. Yum Yum'

I am definitely keeping hope alive. Love this story sooo much. Tom is in big trouble. I can hardly wait for the fear they will have in the hamster cages when Maxine enters the room. What will she do with the cat?
Excellent,
Diesel

Author's Response:

  Thank's Dee!  If you want to be included in the story too, just let me know!  And,  I'll toss you into the next upcoming chapter - along with Licktoy.   Just tell what you want your name to be, ...or, I can come up with one - if you want me to, but - don't complain about it if you don't like it, ... hee hee   I'll think up something for you unless you have one that you want me to use for you.  If not, that's cool too.  Just glad that you're enjoying the story!

 

 

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