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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 12:23 PM Title: Ch. 45 'Prisoners'

Love Dr. Harrison shrinking a few more. I want to see the fear the other little ones have when they first see her.
Love her heels and hose. Black pumps are dominating and sexy.
Will she have a conversation withAmy or maybe the 2 lawyer ladies about shrinking masses of people?
The most thrilling stuff is hearing Dr.Harrison talk about the possibilities.
Great chapter,

Author's Response:

A few chapters with Maxine and the Lady lawyers is a ways down the road, yet, but they'll be back in the story again

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 4:49 PM Title: Ch. 45 'Prisoners'

I think my brain just fainted. (Is that a thing?) I just kept reading one thing after another, tears of joy sliding down my face as I began to understand this chapter. I love it!

Maxine has 7 tinies now. Interesting. She really means business now. She sent Billy home, about to send Tom away and is devoloping plans for the others guys soon.

Billy with Maxine's daughter. As a father figure? Lol. I kinda laughed at that part. Also, the part where her daughter was going to find other uses for Billy was jus of sexy becuase it left me to imagine those possibilities.

But I don't want to imagine this other duo with Amy and Tom. I want to see, read and picture each thing going on from detail to detail. I'm so happy right now!

Did Amy see Tom after he shrunk? Or was she referring to when she saw him in the lobby? Another thing I like is how Tom is attracted to Amy, but also scared by being tiny. What a beautiful combination. Now Amy just has to be a naughty girl like she was with Billy.

Just to clarify, is Maxine going to Amy's place while Tom is in her butt part of her crotch, or is he wrapped up in her dirty pantyhose on the way there?

Hmm. Tommy sounds a bit weird to me. I hope Amy uses just Tom. Or peeping Tom. :)

I also love the name Thomas Speedman. So many jokes can be made. Imagine Tom running and Amy giggles thinking Tom should be slowman instead. Tom tries to escape, but Amy keeps catching him.

Yes, I love the direction of the story. I like what Maxine did with the tinies she had and I can't wait to see the reaction of these tinies with their new owners.

I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Ha, ha, Now That's the kind of review that I like to get! ;`)

  I usually have to re-write a chapter about three times, and sometimes 5 times, but this chapter only had to be tweaked a little bit and I felt pretty good about it.  The Narative in the beginning was a little longer that what I wanted but, it was the only way that I could allow for the experience to play out the way that I wanted it to.

  That said, Maxine will eventually place Tom into her purse (wrapped up in the nylons) and that was revealed at the very beginning - so, I didn't have to carry it out at the end, because you already knew what was about to happen...

  One thing though, I don't want to spoil anything but, - 'Don't forget about 'Angela Cooper' - remember her? She is going to stop by Maxine's office before she leaves for Amy's place, so....  I don't know, about that yet..  ;`)


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