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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 6:44 AM Title: Maxine's Undercover Experiments

Also loved Maxine's shrinking of the cat. Having her shrinking things is cool and powerful. Love her eye looking in at the tiny cat and how she just decides to close the box on the tiny cat.

Author's Response:

Thank's Diesel!  I know sometimes just the slight reference, or suggestion of something like that (Maxine's huge eye looking into the box) - can be just enough to draw you into it...

What until she gets a chance to actually use it on another person.  ;`)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 6:12 AM Title: Maxine's Undercover Experiments

Happy Easter to you also. You describe everything in such detail. I feel like I am there. Maxine and her scientific approach fascinates me. I would love to be small and in her lab.
Love Aunt Joyce, will she get to have a little man in her hands?
Diana is so cute. Love her also.
I think it's time for Maxine to get him back.
Thanks,
Diesel

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 6:27 PM Title: Maxine's Undercover Experiments

Oh no! We don't want Maxine to find out a out Billy. But wait, Billy is in Amy's panties, so I guess it's ok. Amy just has to squeeze her thighs and cross those sexy legs to prevent Billy from yelling for help.

Wow! Maxine is kinda cruel with that experiment. Took her 44 attempts. That's actually not bad considering how impossible shrinking something seems.

That cat isn't exactly the best replacement for Billy. I guess it just served as a the shrinking subject.

Speaking of shrinking animals, I once read a story a very long time ago where this woman took a mouse and she cut off its teeth and claws and shoved it inside her. The mouse would keep scrambling to escape giving her pleasure and the mouse couldn't harm the woman. It was sick, but also kinda sexy. This cat scene reminded me of that.

I remember when I used to like Joy. She had a naughty side to her. But once Amy got focused on her fantasies, I don't care about Joy anymore. Amy having fun is the best thing in this story. I can't wait for her to play with Billy again in the next chapter.

"Don't forget to review". Well, I won't. I always leave a review becuase it's my way of showing that I read it and I like to share what I like/dislike.

Now midnight, this goes both ways. Don't forget to respond to the reviews. :)

I'm really curious about what you think of my little fanfiction that I started dreaming of.

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Whoa, well, ...it seems like you would have Billy ''perminantly attached'' to her underwear throughout the whole story Lol! Ha, ha, (which wouldn't be a bad idea, though) But, the story wouldn't move forward very fast...Ha 

-You do have quite a way with words, Tom.  I like your discriptions, and the detail that you include. Amy could keep Billy there for a much longer time, if we had another shrinkee to add to this tale, ...which, btw, I'm working on right now...

Thanks Dude!  

 

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