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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2017 1:54 AM Title: 'Air Tight'

Trapped in the pleasure zone. Really well done. Love your story.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2017 8:25 PM Title: 'Air Tight'

These last 2 chapters have been amazing! I bet you have lots of fun writing this.

I liked how you added more descriptions about Billy's position. His midsection and legs are against her pussy while his head is against her butthole. What a position!

I also like how when Billy started feeling loose, Amy just pulled him in tighter. And, Amy pressing on the front of her panties was nice too.

Yes! I hope Amy does keep him trapped for a long time in her panties.

As for suggestions, I'm not to sure. This is the stuff I'm looking for. Maybe some more dialogue from Amy's perspective. You can write about her thoughts, about how she enjoys him down there. She can talk to Billy, and how she craves this position and sensation.

Amy could cross her legs, put on some tight jeans, or yoga pants to do some stretches.

Amy could visit the giantess website and she gets a bit horny reading it while Billy is in her panties.

Amy could on with her day, shopping, working, all while Billy is stuck there. At times, she checks in him in bathrooms, fitting rooms, etc. Perhaps, Amy sees the doctor again and Amy doesn't tell her about Billy in her panties and Amy gets that thrill of keeping a secret.

Amy could visit a sex toy show. Find some sexy gadgets that can make her fun more exciting.

I think Amy needs to tie up Billy's arms and gag him with like a tiny cotton ball or something. That way he can't fight back, escape, or even complain. Total control, just the way Amy likes it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom, I like to know that someone else can actually get into this, too.  Your input and ideas really help, giving  me  the extra drive needed to continue with Billy's tale.  I don't have any idea yet, as to how long this story will be, I was just kind of, winging it, (Although, I do have a rough draft - extremely 'rough' LOL) but, we'll see where this goes...



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