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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2016 1:30 PM Title: 'Breakfast at Amy's'

I would like to bathe with Amy. But I am guessing , sink

Author's Response:

Hm, could be, ...but, I doubt it.  Amy's going to get a bit playful in the next chapter!  Thank's Diesel!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2016 12:47 PM Title: 'Breakfast at Amy's'

Lol, how did he eat a whole pancake? Must have been huge!

I think what I liked best was when Billy was scanning Amy. I would be seduced too. If you shrunk and are stuck in a home with that woman, I would have some sexy thoughts too.

Curious about the bath. Will it happen in her mouth? Will they shower together? Or will she just use her hands to scrub him in the sink. Lots of good options.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  He 'Nearly' ate a whole pancake, ...not the entire thing.  And, they were really 'Silver Dollar' size, about three feet across from Billy's perspective.  When he smashed all of the air bubbles out, they weren't very large after all...

...yeah, I'm still trying to build on the character development with this chapter, building up Amy and making sure that she is well described and is easy to visualize.  

...she might lick him clean, she wouldn't want any of that syrup to go to waste now would she...

  Thank's Tom!  Next chapter might be somewhat longer... 

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