Reviews For 'DaiOnna'
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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2016 1:33 PM Title: 'Hide and Seek'

Loved his torment in the hamster cage. Having their voices literally drop him to his knees was great. A very enjoyable chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank's Diesel!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2016 1:26 PM Title: 'Hide and Seek'

Pancakes? Like breakfast? I thought this was dinner. Was hoping Jazzy goes to bed and the real fun begins.

Even Amy just doing simple movements makes me attracted to her. I love the way you described her hips and how the fabric stretched around her fit body. Lokking for more descriptions like that in the future.

Interesting to see Jazzy not throw a tantrum. It just shows me how much control Amy is of her daughter.

A cooking scene. I think what some people want is some food to get in Amy's cleavage and Billy has to get down there and eat it. :)

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

What?'ve never had 'Pancakes' for Lunch, or Dinner?  If not,'ve got to try it!  They're delicious!    (Blueberries and sausage with lots of syrup..., Yum! ;)

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2016 11:27 AM Title: 'Hide and Seek'

Billy escaped by the skin of his teeth! He just needs to be more assertive. If he'd stopped running away earlier, Jazzy never would've chased him that long.

Author's Response:

Yeah, it wasn't any fun when he stopped running away, Jazzy was just playing with him as she would with one of her little pets!

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