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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 3:39 AM Title: Jazzy's Play Room

Great chapter. I see it's going to be fun at Amy's. He now has the terrifying world of Jasmine. I like that she barks orders and pays no attention to his thoughts. I assume Amy will be the same way.
Will Amy come in and let this be his new house. Does a section break off so Amy can carry him in a cage ?
I like when he's called little man. Like a pet. Excellent chapter. Will Amy also be mentally cruel to him?
Love it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

No, this girl's just awkward, and a little clumsy, ...kinda dipsy, but she's a real sweetheart, ...she's not cruel, on purpose!  You'll be looking forward to seeing Joy again, if you want cruel, she'll be returning at some point, and Billy will get himself into some serious situations with her, ...but, you'll have to wait for that, ...I'm saving Joy for last! 

  Thank's Diesel!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 3:24 AM Title: Jazzy's Play Room

If I was Billy, I would fake an injury. I mean, why deal with this stuff? Just make himself look injured or tired and Jazzy will have to ask Amy that there's something wrong and Billy can get some rest.

What keeps Jazzy going is that Billy is playing along. Kids love animated toys, but once the toy stops moving or playing, it's not fun. So if Billy fakes an injury it works. If he refuses to obey Jazzy, she will just force him, but if he makes her feels sad by acting, then she should feel sad or sorry.

I thought Amy would have her fun before Jazzy. Also, I don't like how Amy just lets Jazzy play with him. I would rather Amy be controlling of her daughter and say that Billy is her toy only and maybe she can lock Billy in her master bedroom or soemthing and Billy can't escape. Or, Jazzy gets creative and puts a cage inside Amy's room and the exit leads to a tube which leads to Amy's room where the fun begins.

Really hope Amy gets her turn soon.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

hmm, good suggestions Tom, maybe Jazzy is just curious about things, she'll satisfy herself and then she will soon forget about little Billy, ...Maybe, ya think so...? ;`)

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2016 5:41 PM Title: Jazzy's Play Room

Billy needs to get out of there fast. And shouldn't Amy be supervising her daughter? Seems awfully neglectful of her. Jazzy needs lessons on how to 'be careful', because she appears to be doing the opposite. ;)



Author's Response:

It might not be so bad, maybe Jazzy's Bark is worse than her bite?

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