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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

Love, love ,love, Maxine.

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Thank's Diesel!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 19

That plot twist though. Well played. I never expected that coming. I thought Diana was going to sacrifice herself to save Maggie, but instead she blames Billy?!! Lol, I was shocked. It was the first time, I was genuinely surprised.

Billy should said something like "well, your drawer has been opened a bit more, so I guess that means someone got me. Also, your bedroom door is at a new angle." Maxine is super smart so I was thinking that she couldn't be they gullible.

Well, now we know that Diana is not trust worthy. Already such a privileged girl with a new car at age 16 and already with a gift of a tiny man and now she is abusing her gifts to create lies to make herself pure of any imperfections. Diana can't admit that she did something wrong. Seems childish like when a kid says "he/she did it".

At first, I hated how Maxine was about to punish Billy for all this, but then she started talking and I was changing my mind. She was talking about keeping him as a pet, no escape, stay with her forever, never let him out of her sight, and I was getting excited. Especially when she said she wanted him for tonight. At this point, I was thinking, "oh yeah, Billy actually did it, punish him real good, I got a few ideas..."

So the ending changed everything. Maxine seems to know that Billy didn't escape and I believe that she knows now that her daughter was lying. I still hope Billy gets punished (sexually). It's about time a real woman takes charge.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yeah, Billy thought that he was in some serious trouble there, ...for a moment, but, remember, Maxine is this famous world renowned Phycologist and she can instantly see things that most people would never notice...

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