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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

First off, great responses to my review. You answered all my questions and it was mostly becuase I didn't pay attention to those minor details.

Back to this chapter.

Maggie seems to be planning something. I just don't know what. She keeps looking at him, perhaps thinking of naughty things to do to him.

That dance scene was weird to me, but I bet other reviewers can say that this was some sort of transformation, or in the moment feeling. It was a moment where he didn't care about his worries and just enjoyed the little situation that was going on.

Hmm. I wonder what these girls have planned for Billy. Are they old enough to know any dirty thoughts? Any fantasies? I know the adult women are experienced with this so I won't be surprised if the girls don't think about it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

They've got some tricks up their, ...well, they don't have any sleeves, soooo...  maybe somewhere else?  ;`) 

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