Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love Maxine and the way she handles him. And her panty drawer.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 13

Um....couldn't Maxine just take Billy with her? She even thought of doing it before Joy showed up, then once she did show up, I thought for sure Maxine would have thought, "ok, now I definately have to take Billy now". Maxine "hoped" that Joy didn't see him, but I felt like Maxine taking Billy was such a simple move.

Also, Maxine has to keep watch of Billy nonstop. She can't leave him alone like that. Either he escapes or someone finds him. I thought Maxine couldn't let anyone know about this secret? She seems so calm about leaving Billy here and there as if she doesn't care anymore.

Maxine should not even trust a drawer to keep Billy safe. If anything, Maxine should take Billy everywhere she goes. That way, she is in control over everything.

Perhaps, when we get back to Maxine's assistant, I hope she will be more committed to keep Billy safe and secure.

Man. I miss your descriptions of underwear, my favorite article of clothing to read about. Especially the crotch section. I too, would be going crazy in that drawer, especially if Maxine is a hot as you described her to be. Looks like Billy is starting to enjoy being tiny.

My favorite chapter of all your stories was in Bob's experience, #4, you had a scene where his mother in law kept him in the front of her panties for most of the day and she kept crossing and uncrossing her legs to feel the sensation of Bob. I just wished that Bob was awake during that scene. Also, I wished Bob was awake when she put him in her panties rather than waking up inside them. I relish the reaction of tinies being put inside the underwear.

Perhaps, Maxine has similar kinky ideas to keep Billy safe.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  I suppose that I should have expanded a bit more on Maxine's childhood.  Her kidnapping, and subsequential abuse while growing up in the orient. Her feelings toward all men in general, being just slightly subjective, (To say the least) she can't allow herself to get too close, ...although, it's quite different with tiny Billy; the lady Doctor will slowly become more interested...    Billy, being so small and harmless, will actually become someone that could possibly help her to change the way that she feels toward men.

Thanks for pointing that out Tom!  I went back and reread that chapter and it is fairly short with that particular section and I should have gone into much more detail ....in order to make that character description much more clearly.