Date: October 04 2016 12:09 AM Title: Joyce
Wait a minute? Midnight writer is back?!!!
I was waiting for a new story and it finally was here. Well it was here a while ago, but the strange title caused me to ignore it. It was only until I saw your name behind it that I realized that I had to read it.
I read all 10 chapters at once. Took me a while. I will say that I will defiantely be following this story.
I liked the first few chapters better than the last few. That's just my opinion. Once Diana got so much attention, I starting longing for Amy. Diana has a sexy body, sure. But she doesn't act sexy or seem sexy compared to Amy. Amy has this "good girl" approach and she seems like she is hiding something. Diana is just all out, revealing everything including her nakedness.
My favorite giantesses so far: Amy, Maxine, Diana, and Joyce.
Joyce just sounds like some grandma wearing stripper clothes. Sounds creepy to me.
Diana left talking about Maxine arriving shortly. Didn't Diana consider Joyce in the house? Also, why would Maxine be going out when Diana thought she was staying home? Do people communicate in this house? I expect some exploring by Maxine or Diana soon.
So Maxine is 45, Amanda is 27, Diana is 15 and Joyce is (around 50? 60? )
I was hoping maybe Maxine gives Amanda the gift of a little man for being her best helper for her office. Instead, Billy gets given to a teen whom we didn't meet yet so it felt weird at first.
The bad story's are not sticking with me.....yet. I know they are somewhat important, but it just seems like some typical bad childhood on both Maxine and Billy. However, I do like how Billy remember's his past when the giantesses handle him.
Pissing in the cage is nothing. I just read a story about a giantess putting a tiny in her drink to punish him and he pees in it and she doesn't notice as she slurps it up. Besides, he has plenty of reasons why he can piss there.
Hmm. This is funny. The giantesses just keep getting worse and worse. First, we meet Amy, then Maxine, then Diana and finally Joyce. (The way Billy met them.) What's next, Amy's daughter? I hope she is good. Maybe Amy's daughter can wrap up Billy and give him to her mom as a gift. Aw, how sweet.
Yeah, I don't know about Joyce. Seems crazy to me. Looking forward to Amy.
Love the frequent uploads by the way. Nice work!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thank's Tom! Yea, the title is in Japanese, you can go to 'Google translator' and translate any languages; it's pretty cool too. I've had this tale simmering on the back burner for a couple of years, and I worked on revising it for most of the summer...
I always wanted to write this story, and I just held off because I wasn't too sure if I had the time to justify what it deserves, ...don't worry, though, I've got 23 chapters already finished so...
And, as for Amy, ...she'll be back, and her part will definitely become a central part of the tale. ...enough said...
Thanks again for the detailed review, I always look forward to your insight, and I hope that you continue to enjoy!