Date: July 27 2017 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
How have I missed this so far!?? It is insanly hot like your current Sammy story. I am just in love with this style both with the Sammy one. So great to see a qualified author withting good and hot m/m stuff too. The best and most hot part was where he sat his ass on the "toys" face and even spread his arse apart and pressing his anus on the "toys" mouth... fantastic. I would love seeing like that again in the Sammy story. I totally love allkind of ass humiliation the most. So glad I read this.
Date: February 13 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
hope you're not gone, this still is my favorite story of 2016. truly hope youll come back and continue on the wrath of sammy, and hopefully use some of the ideas I mentioned in the comments, I mostly come on here every day to check if you're posted something again. please don't be gone, you are truly my favorite author on here, there is no one else writing that epic transformation plots with unfortunate endings.
Date: November 09 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just had to think of your story when I saw this part of the anime Yuri!!! on ice: http://wakata.tumblr.com/post/152960070448
I imagine the boy right being like your character and poor Brandon be that stuffed doggy toy, and the boy using it later on as a flesh-light in its butt.
Date: November 05 2016 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
I really liked this story. Kind of wished she would of saw what the stuffed animal was, but instead she finds the drawer full of toys so that was great. I wish there was a bit more tf with the other fun stuff in there lol. Usually prefer object tf vs body. I wish you would of continued and not give it the happy end.
Date: November 05 2016 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great story, wish I could be Brandon actually he. I would welcome more stories like this in the future. Found the idea of mm actually hot and intriguing when done like this plot, written like a Halloween horror story.
Date: November 04 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
I didn't want to give you a bad rating, because of how much I loved the two first chapters, but honestly, chapter 3 was a huge disappointment for me. Why did you switch over to f/m where it was a m/m story? You somehow destroyed the amazing plot for me with this chapter. Also because of how this seemed like a "happy end", and how Brandon even enjoyed himself, which doesn't make much sense in my opinion.
But thats just a personal preference, and I want to be objective in my review. The length is amazing, like the chapter before, and you are a master of ironic twists. I loved the first half or thrift of the chapter. The best part was with Brandons best buddy "turn" for him and befriend this "wimp faggot". I liked how you put the "it can't get worse" a few times. Unfortunatly the ending was a happy endings, so it didn't fit actually.
I loved how you created the Jamie character though. How he was this friendly gay boy, how he had this room looking with cute girly stuff, how he wear those cat ears and earrings and everything, and how he wear skinny skin tight jeans. How he was friendly to everyone, even to Brandons friend, and everything, I just loved that.
The whole plot idea is still a 10 out of 10 in my opinion, even I didn't like the ending, and was hoping for something else, it would be unfair to down vote it because of that.
I was actually hoping for a m/m ending, would be hilerious actually if we find out Charlie was gay too and they would fuck, and then Brandon tf's again ending as Charlies inner ass (his mouth his anus).
Honestly, I am really upset now, that this story is marked as complete. Because I am just so in love with the character Jamie.
I saw what you put in the last line, and I just have to beg you, please moe m/m tf stories like this one, please in a high school (age 16-18), with some twink boy again as the unaware guy. I would just love to see a more unfortunate plot though of some guy actually ending as some twinks ass, and him literally have the "honor" of experience what it would be like to vomit up a bowl movement aka taking a dump. And then the guy just casually wiping, mostly sitting in school or before going to school, and then the poor guy just a shell of his former self, with a "shocked" expression on his "face", like he was literally raped, no, worse, and him vomitting in his mind of what just happened, or even not being able to think anymore, just "looking into an abyss", and *FLUSH* *ZIP*, the boy rushing out, thaaanks moom, bye, and the guy in his ass just screaming in his mind.
Another thing, just a personal favor though, please no giant plots. This story is so good, even I didn't like the ending, I think it's best of 2016 if I could vote, and it truly found a part in my all time favorite list of stories. I also think it's your best story so far you wrote.
So, yes, I wishing to see more high school m/m tf stories like this one. Especially the idea of some himophobic alpha males being just humiliated ending "in hellish" situations is just awesome, and totally now my favorite.
Even if marked as complete, maybe there is still a chance of a sequel and it's not the end yet of Brandon.
Please write more stories like this one!!! :-) Your just have to.
Date: October 14 2016 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
Chapter two was so much better, though one was mostly an introduction to the story. Totally loved it. It reminds me of a body horror plot, really like those. Especially male male ones are even more horrific, especially for someone like Brandon. Poor quaterback becoming a body part of the one he made fun of and called pussy boy, even made fun about his small penis, haha that was awesome with the ending in this chapter to think about. Want to see more really now.
Date: October 12 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for your respons. I'm not a writer though, I have so many ideas. I can't concentrate to sit down, because of depression, it's really hard for me to focus on anything. Reading keeps me happy for some rare moments, and your stories are always one of my favorites. I can't wait to start reading when I saw you had written something new, and this story, truly said, is now my absolute favorite if yours. The surprise in chapter 2 was just breathtaking. I just loved how he at first just casually sat on his toy, I had this picture totally before my mind because how great you described it, with just the toys legs appearing hanging from below the chair at the back of the boys ass.
And then my favorite part totally was how he bulged his butt over the toy and then even spread his cheeks apart with his hands, lowering the gulping anus, I imagine it like a bulging fish mouth, slowly on the "screaming" toys mouth.
I love gross tf and humiliation the most, actually mm even more than fm, because I think theres nothing more humiliating If some straight guy gets "forced gay", and then especially unaware, the normal character casually used something, withouth a 2nd thought he was torturing someone.
Thats awesome news you had more chapters in mind! There are actually so many stuff which would be epic to read. For example the bully becoming a cum stain in the boys boxers after staying some time as his dick, and then the boxers became smelly laying on the ground because he used it as a cumrag for a week or two. How he always cleaned his slimy dick with it too, also smearing dick cheese in it, or even wiped a cum droplet away which inside his butt cheeck, and then the bully, totally already lost his "mind", wakes up the next day as the boys anus as the ultimate state of hell, especially when the nerd casually takes a morning dump or even more humiliting, in school. And he uses a dildo in the bullys "mouth" aka his anus, totally raping his throat with it. but the wors of course would be, the experience of him vomitting out a "giant" turd, with his sense of smell and taste. And I imagine his horrible disturbed and deformed "face", white, ill, frozen with a nightmarish experission.
Then the bully could become the roll of toilet paper in the school bathroom, and has the lovely final experience of all the boys in school wiping their asses with his "tongue" and flushing his awareness more and more away, some may even not flush.
These kind of tf are totally my favorite. Same with the sex doll idea, I like the idea of some totally straight jock becoming not ust a fleshlight (great tf idea too btw), but a sex doll... and then not just one, a female one, and then used by his best friends or the football team during the next school party, and his mind totally going from screaming to just laying there, as a broken object.
Thanks for writing back, love to review. This story is just the best so far. Thank you for this amazing plot. Read it now several times and it just gave me the thrills every single time. It's just how you made it so ... real. so vivid and believable. I can't imagine something more humiliating than this, for a totally straight guy, a jock who brags with how he banged chicks, and loved to bully the weak and especially gay guys. I loved how you made the nerds room look and how it gave the bully a gag reflex. The whole idea with the cat suit and the play, how he spoke... you just made it so real, not just a plot perspective, but also from a psychologic one.
How this toy totally was the stress relief toy for him, and his "best friend", telling him stories when coming from school.