Date: November 13 2016 10:55 AM Title: Annie Gets Her Fun
Loved this chapter! I really enjoy it when guys are punished for things they aren't fully in control of - it just makes the humiliation all the more kafkaesque ;P
I get the feeling that Chris is a bit of an unreliable narrator - he's reccounting the story in a level-headed way, but he's obviously emotionally broken by this experience.
I think it would be interesting if he ended up with some sort of stockholm syndrome that he doesn't want to admit he has. I think he actually loves being at the mercy of these powerful women, and likes the fear and comfort they instill in him.
Or idk, maybe that's just me ;D
Date: November 12 2016 12:47 AM Title: Annie Gets Her Fun
Another good chapter.
Personally I find it funny how Annie gives more thoughts about Chris's life than Mei at this point. Not because she seems to care about Chris but, because Kayla would be mad XD which to be fair considering they live together would definitely not go away anytime soon.
Maybe that'll change and Mei will show she does care... eventually, probably after nearly killing him because you know, friendship and stuff XD. I can see it'd be awkward, but funny.
As always, action is on point. I like the descriptions too. The fact Kayla seems to have that horror movie syndrome that even though something is a bad idea she does it anyway is pretty funny too. That's it really XD good chapter.
Also I get the feeling that whatever you have planned with Sarah... is gonna probably be especially brutal for Chris. Just a hunch, but I would say the chapters with her would be the most brutal of them all as she is his girlfriend which would add... I guess a sense of insult to injury.
I think there'll be revelations along the way about the girls, for Chris. Like Chris finding out, I don't know, Kayla has a massive crush on Mei, or finding out Sarah has a dark secret that she has been hiding, or something. I guess we'll find out.
As always though, good chapter. Looking forward to the next one. Keep up the good work.
Date: November 11 2016 3:08 AM Title: Annie Gets Her Fun
Excellent to see you back, and I love the new chapter! Well worth the wait. As for what next, I think it might be interesting to see Chris slip somewhere unexpected, like maybe falls into Mei's armpit after the giantesses break the kiss, or accidentally gets dropped in her navel as Annie makes her way further down. Regardless, I'm interested in seeing what's next up your sleeve!