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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's called "properly building suspense," Tinyone.

:-)

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Thanks.

Reviewer: Tinyone234 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please get into the shrink stuff. You've gone through a LOT of chapters now with minimal-to-no actual size content. Don't forget that you're writing smut.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Your observation is absolutely correct.  Next chapter will be the beginning of James' new perspective on life.

Reviewer: Dragonling Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story so far! I'm eager to read the next chapter now that Adelaide is about to learn James' fetish

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.  Posting chapter six now.

Reviewer: Yougts Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Best story I've read in a long, long time. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your kind words.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Odddice Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really really have trouble waiting for the next chapter of this. It's one of my favorite stories so far, and the set up has been perfect. The character dynamics and interactions are great and the anticipation of what's next is killing me. Keep up the amazing writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your nice comments.  I'm glad the "character dynamics and interactions" are good.  I try to make the story meaningful through that.

Reviewer: chip Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Normally I don't care too much for long setups but this one has been amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  I'm trying to make each chapter have at least something fun in it.

Reviewer: Lil Speck Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm curious what's going to go down. I for sure thought someone would read his internet history and see the exact stories he liked.

I also wonder about the wife wanting no interest in being his giantess. Maybe that can be arranged without her ever knowing. I mean, it's what he wants, right?


Even if he says no, even if he begs, someone knows otherwise. Two someones.

What would his wife do if she found him the size of a tictac having been in her shoe all day?

Assume he did it on purpose I'd imagine. Drug her daughter into it. At that size he wouldn't really be heard anyways so no way to argue it.

Hrmmm. Just some thoughts. 



Author's Response:

Some interesting thoughts.  I like the possibilities.  Thanks for offering your ideas... it might influence how the story slants.

Reviewer: Lil Speck Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great writing. Everything is set up, I'm so impatiently eager for the next chapter.

>:) 



Author's Response:

I'm happy there's an element of anticipation.  Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: V11 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

"but Adelaide’s view of me is not substantial."

Lol. Wait!!? Is she on here right now!!? Is she reading this!!?

Good chapter. I like the pace so far. I supposed we should all don face-shields and raincoats now as you turn on the excement covered fans. Because in this age of online-capable device saturation, all Addy needed was what had seen; the address of the website. *grin*



Author's Response:

I don't know if Adelaide is reading this.  Thanks for your interest and thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have to say I agree with others who say this has been the best story you have written thus far. The development of characters and the slower pace aren't a bad thing and a decent release of chapters is awesome. Don't lose your groove on this one and good luck!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for commenting.  I'll try to keep a stream of chapters going while I can.  Thanks again, and glad the story is fun so far.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, lots of embarrassing fun.  Very much looking forward to where it goes.


I enjoy that Addie hasn't had to actually shrink the father to totally emasculate him, and I love Addie's casual goddess level super powers.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  I like the same stuff you mentioned... the gradual buildup yet still fun, and Adelaide's prowess with Magicka.

Reviewer: V11 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

you are establishing Adelaide as a wonderful and seethingly dangerous giantess. It brings a tear to my eye. You're killing me here. I might have to write a sequel to something to tide me over for frightening and perky giantess. *swoon*



Author's Response:

I like that: "seethingly dangerous giantess."  Glad the story is interesting so far. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: KYo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2016 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see where this story goes.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment.   The next chapter ought to be fun.

Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really REALLY like this story so far. I'm hoping it doesn't go down the stupidly cruel route that some size writers seem to love, but I am definitely looking forward to future chapters and updates. Keep up the great work, Tiny Jedi.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the review, and I'm glad you like the story so far.  I'm not planning on the story getting too cruel... it should be more playful than that.

Reviewer: Lil Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Continue please *_* ! I love that. 



Author's Response:

Glad it's interesting so far.  Thanks for leaving a comment.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

You have a truly Marvel-ous grasp of copyright law. ;-)

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting. ;-)

Reviewer: V11 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, just immediately into chapter 2 I could tell you're getting better, or changing your focus or something. I am enjoying it a lot. I hope you don't give up on Stepsister's Delight... It's at a cool place, such a cliff-hanger!

Stick around, it's fun hunting down your additions. Like Christmas... for... deviants. It isn't the holidays often enough, IMHO



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments.  I appreciate it.  There's a good chance I'll continue my other story eventually.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start for a story.

There should be way more reviews on all of your stories, they are so good!

Maybe there are so few reviews due to lazy people like me, or maybe people just don't have anything to complain about and write angry reviews ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your comments.  And I'm glad that the stories I've posted in general are of interest.

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 20 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really solid start. Your writing here is good, and as far as your previous stories go, this is my favorite starting chapter to anything you've done 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice comments. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Incest is wincest!



Author's Response:

Great line.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

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