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Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2016 5:57 PM Title: Experimentation

Wow. For a guy that isn't really into feet, you do a damn fine job of writing it! This was a great chapter. I loved it. All of the small details and the interaction. And now I won't be able to think of them as anything other than Dardrew. Can't wait for more. Well done!

Author's Response: That means a whole lot coming from you, man! I do like feet, but it just doesn't inform my fetish as much as other aspects, you know? That said, I couldn't help but imagine myself in Andrew's position several times while writing this. Thank you so much for reading, scholar! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Saftkeur Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2016 2:32 PM Title: Experimentation

Such a cute and fun chapter, as they always seem to be! I wouldn't consider myself to be a fan of feet, but it's just too nice not to enjoy here; not overdone, enough plot still to drive you along, and I especially like that we can feel as though we're watching these two really exploring their relationship.

Some minor details: Andrew's name appears to change to Matt once in the story, and there's a couple of words that seem to be out-of-place (words that, I suspect, escaped those tell-tale red lines by virtue of being a different word altogether). They're few and far between, but do stand out a bit due to that very contrast.

All in all another chapter worth the wait, and once again leaving me impatiently waiting for the next!



Author's Response: This was an absurdly fun chapter to write- I loved exploring with these two and it's been fulfilling to see such a warm reaction to it. More shorts to come! Thank you so much for reading and supporting, Saft :)

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