[Report This]Date: August 26 2016 8:38 PM Title: End of evening.
Said it before not into feet but still like this situation. Kind of wished he didn't make it to her foot. I wonder what she'll do now, “I can’t guarantee I’ll give him back in one piece though!” Happy to hear you'lll be adding butt soon. Also about the language if you didn't say anything I doudt anyone would of even known. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot. You following the story although you don't even like feet -which there is an heavy amount in there- cheers me up a lot. Bear with it just a little more, and the content should rise up quite significantly.
Date: August 26 2016 3:02 PM Title: End of evening.
Destroy you? No. Another great chapter I thought.
Your English is good - better than mine in some cases and your writing is near spot on. I know from my own past experience there is a desire to get the latest chapter posted as fast as possible but when you finish, take a breath and set it aside at least overnight then look at it the next day. You will almostalways find something you want to improve.
Faith and Yuna are both incredible. I still think James should be pleading his innocence (sp) more. Your story though and you are doing great!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
carnaj
Author's Response:
And once again, thanks a lot! What would I become without your reviews, I wonder...
I'll keep that in mind, and will do so for chapter 10. It will be hard, but I shall manage to contain my urge to post the chapter too fast, haha!
What is "sp"? Otherwise, I probably do agree. When I read stories, I often, very often, happen to find myself disappointed because the main character, the victim, doesn't try to get out of his situation enough. I'm probably doing the same mistake I've read countless times, and will try to correct that.
I'm glad you find those two girls incredible! It means a lot.
Hopefully, next chapter should be up in the next few days.