Date: August 11 2016 3:08 AM Title: Planning ahead.
Another great chapter, Max. Loving the build up as the girls get together to set the stage for James' unwitting, unwilling and unwanted demise. Looking forward to see their plan set into motion. I'm assuming that will happen next chapter and I'm looking forward to it.
You mentioned 'Brian's Solemate' as inspiration and I had to look it up on here. I hadn't read it before, but it was good. Truthfully however I am liking your take on the scenario better. Plus there were distracting mistakes such as getting the girls' names backwards in spots and such. Just little things that can easily be spotted in a quick read though before posting. I know writers get excited when they finish a chapter and want to post immediately - I'm guilty of that too. A quick read though however often picks up on the little errors. Your story so far seems that you take the time to do that and it is appreciated.
Like I said; great chapter and eagerly anticipating the next. Keep up the good work!
PS: Just read your message and will get back to you shortly on that.
carnaj
Author's Response:
Thanks for your inspired reviews, carnaj. Your support really helps me. Hopefully I'll manage to keep the quality up !